holy...now I'm sympathizing with her! What have you done?! XD But poor Thunderblast...and Jetfire did all of that to her...guys got issues coming out the yinyang! wow...well written, awesome, and very sad...keep up the good work ^^

this was good. :)

aw, that really did tug at the emotions!

Nice that some people doesn't always write Thunderblast as a **,even thought she can be annoying.
The story was kinda sad,but nice,and JetfirexThunderblast pairing was cool.
Great job! ;)

Wow, very good. You got Thunderblast's personality in it perfectly! Great job.

Nice one-shot. There aren't many authors who use this pairing and in such a dramatic way.

Poor Thunderblast I really feel bad for her troubled past life. *Shakes head in disgrace*

Good luck on your other stories. ^^

Wow... that was... I'm not sure what exactly to say here. But it was great look into Thunderblast's past. The onoly thing is that I would have taken my hand and put it through Jetfire's spark... but that's if I was writing. AWESOME job!