 Megatron's Blackfire 2009-04-19 . chapter 1holy...now I'm sympathizing with her! What have you done?! XD But poor Thunderblast...and Jetfire did all of that to her...guys got issues coming out the yinyang! wow...well written, awesome, and very sad...keep up the good work ^^ |
 flamingmarsh 2009-04-19 . chapter 1this was good. :) |
 StarSwoop 2009-04-19 . chapter 1aw, that really did tug at the emotions! |
 EvilBunny91 2009-04-19 . chapter 1Nice that some people doesn't always write Thunderblast as a **,even thought she can be annoying.
The story was kinda sad,but nice,and JetfirexThunderblast pairing was cool.
Great job! ;) |
 Mrs. Optimus Prime 2009-04-18 . chapter 1Wow, very good. You got Thunderblast's personality in it perfectly! Great job. |
 Amethyst Authoress 2009-04-18 . chapter 1Nice one-shot. There aren't many authors who use this pairing and in such a dramatic way. |
 GrimlockX4 2009-04-18 . chapter 1Poor Thunderblast I really feel bad for her troubled past life. *Shakes head in disgrace*
Good luck on your other stories. ^^ |
 DarkxPrince 2009-04-18 . chapter 1Wow... that was... I'm not sure what exactly to say here. But it was great look into Thunderblast's past. The onoly thing is that I would have taken my hand and put it through Jetfire's spark... but that's if I was writing. AWESOME job! |