I am loving this story, does Dawn encounter a stasis pod with Piplup and if so is this where the empoleon maximal comes from? The only real problem I am having with this story is the time between updates. I also greatly enjoyed your first pokemon beast wars story as well. I repeat please update soon.

cool,
can't wait for update

So this is where Paul joins the Predacons.

Great to see you writing again...

Excellent work so far. I am glad you managed to find a way to squeeze Paul and Dawn in this somewhere.

As for Paul becoming an ally with the Predecons, all I have to say is, I wouldn't be suprised in the least. That trainer never learns, and I hate the way he treats his pokemon. So far the only right move he did was releasing his Chimchar.

Anyway, again great work and way to stay with all the characters personality.

Awsome chapter there. Also can you have Dawn and Paul become a couple in this fic?

this was a very good chapter keep it up and please update soon

Well isn't this just prime. The jerk from ''Diamond and Pearl' is gonna team up with them preds.
good chapter, can't wait for the next one.

I think know why, but I'll tell ya when the next chapter is updated.

Nice. What's been taking you so long to update?

Good job

wow, both the stories were amazing
will you please update soon?

Excellent work on this. I was hoping when you would do another. I await the next one ASAP.

Thank you for making a new pokemon wars story. I had some ideas for your pokemon wars story if the pokemon wars took place befor the battle frontier, like where some statis pods would land, starscream teaming up with the pokelantis king while they poses beedriller and ash, And starscream coming back taking control of the mirage pokemon systems, becoming a mirage predacon/deceptacon with a mewtwo form, then getting killed by the maximals, predacons, and humans with there pokemon. Is the arcanine transformer named rk9 tigertron? Because cheetor and tigertrin had a good frendship because they were both cats so it would be great if blazehound and rk9 called each other big hound and little hound. How about you also add a maximal named swoop (a namesake of the autobot swoop)with an aerodactul form so he, bastibot and grimlock can be the new dinobots. And can you name the meganium predacon thunderblast? And don't forget, the whole reason why the maximal were trying to get to there base was to see if the moon stone they had was energon or not. Also, how about blackaracnea enters the pokemon contest(in disguise),where may reterns, as a distraction for the predacons to plant bomes, but are defeated in the end(and megatron seeing the lake pokemon that ash saw). Also, beast wars ironhide is not the original ironhide(he was killed in the g1 movie). And how about pauls exoskelitin is actualy controling him by megatron. And how about bastibot apearing when hunter j tries to capter the sheldon and 1 sheldon evolves while being frozen and getting scaned by bastibots pod. And how about you name the garchomp rocketcon scourge. Not to mention the rocketcons killing giovani and serving megatron if your last pokemon wars story is based on the last beast wars episode. And what if charitron and the female blazekin predacon had a hate/love relationship. And can megatron also try to gain legendery pokemon for power, and ariodox having the ability to control other ariodos? And please do not ad in any dawn/paul shippings. I also have some pokemon/transformers scetches that I like to show you if you would like them. And i'm realy sorry this is so long, i'm just a big fan.

Oh Boy! A Sequel! Can't wait to read the rest.