hahaha!! very funny! man i didnt expect marluxia and larxene to have to clean up, but now that i think about it, that makes sense!! are you going to make a roxas story?? i love your stories. especially the oneshots!! (i liked the zexion, axel, and demyx stories!! they tied for first!)^^ very cute

nice chapter, yo. can't wait till the next one.

OMG that was so funny I love it you did a great job and I can't wait for you to post the next one.

Oh. Two covered at the same time! It was really sweet, I liked it. The bit with the maid outfits was a great way to end it. And yes, I am looking forward to your next one. And your wonderous plans for it. Keep up the good work!

-Nac

Cool, I was beginning to think you'd forgotten this series. Nice to see Marluxia and Larxene back in the mix. Can't wait for the next one.

Oh. My. God. *dies in laughter*

"Oh? Jealous Marluxia? Don’t worry, I think you’re beautiful too."

Pure and utter brilliance.

i liked it :D

The waiting paid off. it's briliant. Thank you.

yay! you updated! I love how the storys were intertwined togather! It's makes me excited to see the new chapaters your writeing.~

Okay, so it's been a while since this story was updated, but the wait was more than worth it. I loved the intertwined stories, the new characters (a strong woman and a flirty man as well as his son), the dialogue was well written, the action scenes were very nicely done, just a great story all around. And now it's time to round out the group. I can't wait to see what you've got planned for Roxas. Perhaps you'll bring Namine into play as well? I'll keep my eyes open for the alert email! Well done!

Personally, I was beginning to think that you had forgotten about this story. Glad I am to be wrong. And now, onto the review.

It was good. really. I liked it. Also thought posting both of them alternating in the same chapter was a nice touch. Especially seeing as how you didn't have them end up with each other. For some reason, I always had a feeling that Marluxia came from some island place. Like in Lilo and Stitch. As for where they ended up, well it was a nice twist. And worked out pretty well. As for their respective partners...Mary was pretty cool. And I'm surprised that she wasn't also there with Richard watching them clean up. She's a pretty tough lady. Maybe would have enjoyed it. And Richard? Him I definitely liked. And his munchkin of a kid Walter. I wouldn't half mind seeing some kind of one shot on daily life there in TWTNW, with all the new people. 11 new women, one new man and 2 children. I'm seeing Richard getting along very well with some of the high ranked members. Especially Xaldin, Xigbar and Luxord. But still, for all the wait, I really did enjoy it. It was a wait worthwhile.

And now...to the last member who is currently joined back with Sora. I guess this means that they will try to find sora? After all, Roxas was the only one who became one with his somebody. How do you intend on separating them? and Namine as well I suppose?

Always looking forward to more.
Tera Earth.

(SQUEALS)

YAY! YOU FINALLY DID IT! At least they're better than my ideas I gave you. THIS ONE HERE OS BRILLIANT!

CONGRADULATION!

I can't wait for the next chapter you said. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! SEEYA!