I really love this story! Omar seems to be so in character and the two girls are a great touch. Teal is soo going to be in trouble and Lexi is soooo adorable. Didn't get to see much of Angel, but that will change over time.

Wonderful story, keep writing cause I want MORE!

PLEASE TRY AND UPDATE SOON, ITS REALLY GOOD SO FAR

please continue, its really really good.

Another splendid chapter! _ Can't wait to read more of it.

OMG, just where to begin...First of all, I LOVE this story! Everything you've come up with for it, I find to be very entertaining & enjoyable to read. I love the concept of Omar writing his biography, & the whole deal with his children is positively cute & heart-warming. I can certainly say I look forward to reading more of the story whenever you get the chance to update it! _ Keep up the splendid work, luv! :D