I really like this story. Twisted, dark and corrupt, I like the flow of it and Atton's view on weakness seems to fit him really well.

I know you only hinted but I still thought there was something a little hot about this. I liked that subtle sexiness very much, also how it tied into the psychological side of it all.

Ah, the lusty lure of the Dark side (yellow eyes and corpse look not withstanding). Even evil Sith Atton has some strange appeal to me, the only thing I can liken it to is a Vampire - he's probably gonna hurt you then kill you in the end, yet he still just oozes sex... I can see why a Dark Male Exile would go for that, particularly how you have characterised this Exile, all the hurt and pain he carries. A kind of death wish I suppose, and a rush I cant see him getting with the others. Very fitting.