Aw. A great look at Charlie watching Olivia slip away. The image of the fingers on the piano keys is a great sentence. Very well done!

"Agents used to stick to their own kind..."

Oh my GOD.

"To forsake him is one thing. To do so for riffraff is quite another."

Oh my freaking GOD.

I love this. This has to be one of my favorites from you. Because you see Peter and Olivia, and I see them, but you made Charlie see them, and that's just fantastic. I like that he thinks she in a strange metaphorical science cult.

Fantastic job, as per usual. :)

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a Charlie fic: GREAT!

I LOVED this! There aren't that many Charlie stories out there, which is a shame because he is an interesting character. Of course, I haven't written anything about him, so I shouldn't talk :) Great job!

Aw Charlie! You make me want to hug him.

She craves more such details, holding them as sacred objects and Charlie cannot forgive this new religion. To forsake him is one thing. To do so for riffraff is quite another.

This part right here was perfect. Absolutely and completely.

this is gorgeous and lovely and probably exactly true (wow, my grammar in the morning is so much fun : )

and can i just say the title is perfect :)