 Mionefan 2009-11-07 . chapter 2A Good story so far. Looking forward to more of this one. There are several ways this could go. Unfortunately, the next chapter doesn't sound like it will be a happy Ron chapter. He needs to be distracted by someone like Luna or Lavender, I would suggest. |
 Your Mother A.K.A Yerr MA 2009-08-24 . chapter 2I honestly felt like killing myself after that cliffy :L
Love these two chappys hope u update soon |
 happylady 2009-08-10 . chapter 2This a great story please post more soon.
Until next time
Gloria |
 Obsidian Dancer 2009-07-20 . chapter 2I love how in-character you've kept everyone (except Ginny, she seemed more annoying in this, but I suppose it works with the story better that way?). Harry's so awkward! :D It's really delightful, your writing is fantastic. Keep it up! |
 Fantasy's Magic 2009-07-08 . chapter 2Will you be updating still? I hope so - this is really good, and I look forward to (hopefully) reading more.
Thankyou!
FM |
 I'm-Reading 2009-05-19 . chapter 2You've got me hyperventilating here, this is a really good H/Hr. Though for some reason I find myself really liking Ginny. Odd isn't it. I hope you continue, I'm dead curious to find out what will happen next. |
 Katrina Seeder 2009-05-10 . chapter 2OMG !! CLIFFHANGER ! You must update soon ! MUST ! |
 librarywitch 2009-05-06 . chapter 1Off to a nice start. Hope my fav couple can get together in your tale. Thanks for sharing. |
 iRocUDontLOL 2009-05-05 . chapter 2Great story! plz update soon! |
 MrsBlaCKwIfe 2009-05-05 . chapter 2I love i t..i need to read more..
update soon plz |
 alix33 2009-05-05 . chapter 2"Lemonade seeped over the white tablecloth, the stain slowly spreading. A wand flicked out. “Reparo,” muttered an all-too-familiar voice. “Hi, Harry.” - IMO, Hermione would have used 'Scourgify', to clean up the spill; since the glass with lemonade did not actually break (in which case she WOULD have used 'Reparo').
Oh dear... (at Ron having overheard Hermione's and Harry's conversation). |
 alix33 2009-05-05 . chapter 1"and as even groceries are somewhat of a luxury right now," - Don't worry: That too shall pass. I speak from personal experience: I had YEARS that were like that, and no doubt I will have them again once I'm a little old lady.
"It was just a silver sliver in the slowly darkening sky, accented by the peach and rosy glow of the sunset." - That peach, rosy and silver makes for a simply smashing mental pic all together like that.
"Was it only because he’d learned that she was interested that he was getting all discombobulated?" - Hermione has definitely rubbed off on Harry (No! I didn't mean in THAT way! Jeez!) if he can handle polysyllabic words in his thoughts. |
 HJP265 2009-05-05 . chapter 2oh my god. why did you end it here...no don#t explain it just upload the next chapter, please.
PLEASE |
 Till2NiteDoUsPart 2009-05-05 . chapter 2YAY! Confrontation next time! I didn't like reading about Ron with Hermione. Update soon |
 Mongoosie 2009-05-05 . chapter 1This was good, feels very organic; kinda like if the huge gap in time during "Stupid" had not happened and they were able to deal with their feelings sooner. Hope to see more of this. |