Poor Shin...

SNIFFLES UPDATE!

Now ya got me crying! I was edgy at reading this at first, cause i don't like incest, but the way you presented the summary made me wonder, and now that i've read it, it's so sad and touching. Poor Shin. He's killing himself over feeling like this. It's a very compelling story and maybe you could do a sequal, but it's actually fine the way it is. This was very good, and hope you continue write more fics. Arigato, Van the Key of Lain.

aaawww! poor shin! but who WOULDNT love Jou... anyways update PLEASE!

That was somewhat disturbing, but really cool.

Ah, it's so rare to see a fic revolving around the other Kido brothers. Nice angst, and good approach on the subject of incest. I like.

*blinks* Interesting...angsty, which is always a plus but...wow. *blinks again* The scary thing is I think I like it.*idly wonders if that means I'll go to hell now* Keep up the...unique (?) work. )

I think I liked it better in the first version. Still, good Shin angst and at least Shuu got to do something this time around.