Read this while invigilating an exam -- had to be careful not to burst laughing out loud. It's a gem.

I agree with Khell. You should really post warnings! But then again, so should Khell!

Oh, I really should know better than read one of those shorts marked "Humour" while having breakfast. You really should add a "Danger! Choking-hazard while eating!" type of warning in the header. ;) Thank god I didn't have any tea in my mouth, yet, our my computer screen probably would have to be replaced ...

Wonderful story!

*rofl* ! Oh this is adorable!
I can totally see it all happen ... it's like having a cinema in your head. ;o)

You really capture their banter. Are you sure you're not one of the original writers of TNA in disguise? Could very well be.

Two thumbs up! Thanks for writing!!

Fantastic! One of your best.