o my god. so he bumped into a sofa. it is *not* the end of the world.

that was cool i can't wait until part 2

I think this is a great start! Keep going! The only thing I didn't like was Nick cursing, even if it was just in his mind. "Little Men" never had any sort of cursing on the show, so it weirds me out to read a "Little Men" story with language in it.