ROFL!

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Lol, this is good. Shiro's little chant at the end had me rofl. Great job! It was really cute...O,o ermm,in a perverted sort of way,eh.lol

They are in public and the kids and mother are near by XD

How very cliche of this little one shot is, but still, so cute.

I wonder what they're gonna do at home alone together in a room

The first words out of my mouth when I read this was 'Aw... thats cute.'
Dunno why, though... I kinda forgot why I said that, but oh well. Great job (like always)! You're works just makes my stomach flutter with amusement and joy (and sometimes horny-ness... if that's even a word...).
Anyway, Keep writing! :D

~~ HOC

I love that last line were Shiro's singing. XD

lol i love shiro's little song at the end

i dont wanna get told off by the policmen for indecent exposure again i died at the again XD they did it more than once im sure XD love your stories you like my favoritist author

XDXDXD So good!I laughed a lot!I love how you write Shiro and Ichigo!They're so well written...And the end was very cool XDXDXD Caught again, ne?It would be another good story XDXD I hope you'll continue writing more!BYE!

poor ichi.
poor impressionable children.
poor, poor police officers. i would not want to deal with these paragons of horniness.
heh... awesome story. but now i can't wait for summer to be here...

Ah...LOVE IT! You should write one with a popsicle xD. My girlfriend and I absolutely love your stories. haha.

this was so cute and funny! you are the master of HichiIchi! i love you! and your works of course. XD

Bwahaha! Funny! Mad funny! I tried to write a oneshot about a couple of weeks ago...but my thoughts are stale. D: You're really good with coming up with oneshots.

aww shiro's so cute :)

Aw that was cute! Gotta love Shiro...

lawlage, all the way. the world lives for cliches, yes it does. hee hee hee hee.