 uptowngirl48 2009-11-16 . chapter 49I must say reading the draft letters(?) were hilarious! |
 RedsAttic 2009-11-06 . chapter 53WOOT!
EXCELLENT!
10+ |
 WARPED KAWAII 2009-10-31 . chapter 53i just want to say your brilliant! |
 watin77 2009-10-29 . chapter 53this is definitely one of the best severus/hermione fics i've read. you did a brilliant job and i loved it! |
 Anniely 2009-10-19 . chapter 53Hallo!
Ich habs geschafft! Neben Biologie und anderen Trivialitäten hab ich es endlich geschafft deine Story fertig zu lesen.
Ich denke, in zweit Teilen ist immer noch schneller als in drei und vielleicht schaff ich die nächste in einem ;)
Ok, aber hier das wirkliche feedback: Was gleich am Anfang deiner Story kommt, und mir auch gleich "gefallen" hat, ist der "neue" Harry Potter. Nicht dieser "Alles war gut" Happy Ever After Typ, sondern einer, der auch nach dem Ende des Krieges noch mit etwas zu kämpfen hat.
Und die Idee mit dem Baby's Breath fand ich super, obwohl ein Zaubertrank, der nach Windeln duftet, wahrscheinlich kaum ein Verkaufsschlager werden würde.^^
Beim lesen der Summary hab ich mich ein bisschen gewundert: Italien? Das ist schon mal was Neues. Hatte auch nicht die leiseste Ahnung wie du Hermione nach Rom bringen willst, aber die Kurve hast du super gekriegt!
Ach ja, und Severus. Es gab eine einzige Stelle an der ich ihn überhaupt nicht mehr verstanden habe, aber da ich die Stelle nicht mal mehr wiederfinde, war es auch nicht so wichtig. Aber ich finde wirklich, dass Snape durchgehend super geschrieben ist. Nicht wie der Snape den ich kannte, aber duraus ein glaubwürdiger Severus.
Ich finde es auch wirklich schön - ich glaube ich kenne zu wenige Worte für toll und klasse - wie du Hermione und ihn schliesslich zusammengebracht hast. NIcht zu überzogen, aber auch nicht zu wenig überzogen.^^
Ach ja, aber mein Lieblings Kap ist Chapter 49, Letters. Einfach weil ich es sehr passend hier finde und obwohl man eigentlich hautsächlich Brieffetzen zu lesen hat, zeigen diese doch wirklich haargenau wie Minerva und Snape sich fühlen und das ist klasse (ich sags ja, zu wenig Wörter) dargestellt. ABER: Puddlemere gewinnt tatsächlich mal?! WOW. :))
Ansonsten kann ich nur noch sagen, dass ich das Draco/ Millie Seitenpairing anders finde, aber im sehr positiven Sinne.
Mein abschliessendes Urteil: Obwohl FF grad spinnt schreib ich das hier noch ferti. Also, ich liebe deine Stories und diese hier ist keine Ausnahme! Werd mich auf jeden Fall noch an die "From the Corner"Story machen, auf die hab ich ja schon ein Auge geworfen!
Also, Tschö, Adios, Bye, Salve und so weiter
Anne |
 Libbindy Luthien 2009-10-16 . chapter 53WOW! This is most certainly the best Severus/Hermione fic I've ever read! I would really love a sequel or even just a mini-sequel to follow this fic! it couldn't really end with Severus still in hiding and them with children couldn't it? Please! |
 Nanchih 2009-10-15 . chapter 53Satisfactory. I always was surprised that Hermione married Ron. He had potential, but after book 1 he failed to live up to it. Your Sev is so much better! |
 Venuspixie 2009-10-15 . chapter 53Loved the story a good turn out. though i am a bit confused Ryan's Hermiones and Severus's son but what year is he? cause you said ""Severus shook his head. “It's still odd though. My eldest son in seventh year, my daughter in second year and my grandson a first year.”"" Wouldn't that be Jack, Lillian and Luca? Then you writ ""I don't know if Lillian's written you but my little sister got sorted into Slytherin as well!"" Isn't she a second year? They would have found out over the holidays or something. Anyway loved the story. |
 LunaLovegood1117 2009-10-11 . chapter 53Loved it. Not as much as Acquittal, but still loved it. I don't really know what all to say, but it was very good. Gave me something to do when I was supposed to be working on a school project instead. ;) Once again I say thank you for a good story! |
 excessivelyperky 2009-10-09 . chapter 53I'm really amazed that Sev's secret has been kept so long; but this is a good life that Hermione and Severus have together. A pity that they did not marry by Muggle rites; those papers need never go to the Ministry. But this was a great story. |
 excessivelyperky 2009-10-06 . chapter 52At least Hermione realizes that she doesn't _want_ to get Snape killed by dragging him back to life. Once she got over her little emotional fit, and realized that Snape _was_ willing to risk his life to marry her, that is. Hermione is still very much a Gryffindor--leap first, think later, though she was supposed to be such a clever witch. One has to wonder if Pomona Sprout would be a tad more cooperative with the right kind of paperwork and keeping it nice and private (besides, you know by now that Minerva has told her thst Snape is still alive; it's only a matter of time before it shows up in the Prophet anyway).
Very good chapter. |
 excessivelyperky 2009-10-05 . chapter 51I take it that Claude is the young gentleman who would have been a good Hufflepuff? And yet, he could never get in as Minister of Magic if he was a Slytherin--all that is bad comes from Slytherin, everybody knows that, at least the Prophet says so (and if Hagrid repeats it to everyone, then I'll bet he heard it from Dumbledore).
I love Hermione's proposal, and hope Snape takes her up on it as soon as possible. I also hope that Letitia doesn't feel left out once she's part of the Weasley family. After all, Molly has a cousin who is a Squib, and she never talks to him or has him over for dinner. Will she treat Letitia the same way? |
 laurah 2009-10-04 . chapter 36 good |
 excessivelyperky 2009-10-02 . chapter 50Wonderful chapter. And Severus Snape is absolutely right. The moment after he took the Mark he had no life till his escape from the Shrieking Shack. I hope Minerva _really_ understands, and doesn't call for him to rescue her and other people, because he would _do_ it, and undoubtedly risk his life by doing so. And she would be as guilty as Dumbledore of manipulating him.
But I still wonder who she's going to whisper this little secret to, if only by mistake.
Hermione should have kept her mouth shut. She may lose the perfect family that she wants because of it. |
 excessivelyperky 2009-10-02 . chapter 49Yes, any fic from you will be very acceptable!
I loved this chapter--all those letters going back and forth (and the versions written before the real ones were sent--those were very good indeed).
I'm glad that Minerva is sorry; and yet, Severus is right--if he had stayed in Britain she would have found some way to use him, and still never really trusted. He gained more respect by being able to go away (notice that Bill and Charlie are more respected in the Weasley family than Percy is). |