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| wooper134 2008-07-02 ch 1, | abuseomg the ending was so cute! i loved it! |
| Lucky One 2008-05-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseMm. A decent fic, but that's actually more than I expected. After all, the writing style was dry and predictable, and the couple in question is rather failful at best. I heard from an acquaintance that you read Lucky Star fanfic. You should take a look into some of the better fics there, like Luster127's "There's Always Another", or "A Second Opinion" by nukerjsr. You may pick up some useful writing skills, as well as writing good couples. |
| prettygirl17 2007-05-08 ch 1, | abuseAWsome! Definately one of my favorites! |
| animedynasty 2006-06-22 ch 1, | abusenice ^^ i love these fluffy fics...they make me feel all warm inside... GREAT JOB! ^^ |
| Psyduck Ranger 2005-11-01 ch 1, | abuseI'd like to point out that Pikachu has met Santa and his pokemon at least twice. Also you forgot that Misty is taller than Ash. Otherwise, pretty good, keeping them in their original characters, not their new personalities for the advanced generation(which sucks). AAML forever! (Insert ship)shippers die! |
| neogirl7900 2005-05-18 ch 1, | abuseLol, funny! That was really hilarious! Although you think Ash would never allow mistletoe at another party again after what had happened back in track seven. Somehow, all the Pokemon Christmas Bash fics are real good. This was was so funny. Now I want Christmas!! Why must I wait so many months!? Fine then, I'll just have to make Christmas! -throws around snow- Okay, so it doesn't snow where I live anyway. Big deal. Um, yeah, I'll stop babbling now... I know you said you felt wrong writing this, but you did a good job. Really. That was hilarious. Nice to see a good Pokemon Christmas Bash fic. It's really good. This is going to be one of the few fanfics I force my mom to read. It's really, really good. |
| cyberfrogX 2005-04-06 ch 1, | abusehmm... funny thing about christmas, the elves and presents... thats mostly just an integrated pagan ritual thing; should be against my religion as well. But it isn't... apparently. Anyways, good short story. |
| Loon Of The Fruits 2003-02-22 ch 1, | abuseAw.very sweet. Best Christmas Pokemon fic ever, I especially liked the part about the Jewish Pikachu! Very cute! Enja |
| Adriana Chan 2002-07-31 ch 1, | abuseOMG!!!! that was SOOOOO KAWAII!!!! i loved it!! |
| Ketchum 2002-06-12 ch 1, | abusei like how u consistantly in al ur stories call as pikapi misty pikachupi and brock the squinted one. I also loooove how you made the songs be in there without writing hte whole song like the christmas story one and the santa pikachu one :) and making pikachu jewish! i love it! yay!!!!! the ending was hysterical! ha!!!!! gotta love misty :) n e wayz, good job! l8ers! |
| Glitcher 2002-01-17 ch 1, | abuseAwwww, that was another very sweet fic, Growlie. I'm amazed you didn't go on a Brock-bashing rampage this time. ^_^ It was strange seeing Team Rocket playing the good guys in this story, but I guess anything's possible at Christmas. As usual, you've captured everyone's personalities perfectly, which made this fic all the more enjoyable to read. That mistletoe thing at the end was a lovely touch, too. All in all, a wonderful AARMN. Encore! |
| DarkWobbuffet 2002-01-11 ch 1, | abuseMan Growlithe, what's with you and writing fics that are just terrific? This was incredable writing and I can't wait to see more fine work from you! =) |
| animorphs17 2002-01-08 ch 1, | abuseThat story was kinda good, though I wasnt very fond of the shots you took on Christmas, but I guess I can understand why you did it. Oh, that toy Ash convo between Brock and Misty was hilarious! |
| David Grant 2002-01-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseAbsolutely Brilliant, and Funny, when do we get to see more of these stories |
| Coolie87 2001-12-25 ch 1, | abuseWhat a story. "Gotcha" heheheh. That's all I can say. |