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Super naruto 14
2009-12-08 . chapter 16
Dude the fic was awesmene cant wait for next one.
Kunoichi-Shea
2009-12-07 . chapter 16
Yay! Thank you for writing such a wonderful story! I really enjoyed reading it! It was absolutely adorable!
kawaiigurl93
2009-12-07 . chapter 16
i loved the different perspective of the story! nice add to the ending! the story was great throughout! LOVED IT
oceanmoon
2009-12-07 . chapter 1
So cute I hate stories that move way too fast. You're doing a good job.
Andy Wong Fey Hong
2009-12-07 . chapter 4
Sorry mate, I should have reviewed from Chapter 1, but I'm only doing it now for Chapter 4. This is easily one of the best stories I've read so far. What struck me is the slow, gradual and realistic pace your taking Naruto and Hinata's relationship. I'll admit that I was hoping for an instant lemon when I read your story but in this chapter, I'm glad you haven't, and I'm astounded by this chapter.

Especially Neji's line:

... I'll cut off your head, and I don't mean the one above your shoulders!

God, that nearly had me laughing my head off. Brilliant, utterly brilliant, is that something you came up with yourself, or is it a line from somewhere else?

I loved this chapter also in that it dealt with both Naruto's and Hinata's realistic fears for the future of their relationship instead of just diving into the lovey dovey aspetcs. Which by the way, you ended spectacularly with.

The last line with Tenten was also funny, although uncharacteristic of Naruto who is usually too dense to notice his surroundings.

take care. will try to review more as I read though.
CandyGirl999
2009-12-07 . chapter 16
It was a great story. I'm just sorry to see it end...
Dalaion
2009-12-07 . chapter 16
Really awesome fanfic,its a shame that ended, but great work!

XD
pho
2009-12-07 . chapter 6
It's very good... I love this story...
NaruHina forever!
RPGuy777
2009-12-07 . chapter 16
sequal? great story by the way
FenriGod
2009-12-07 . chapter 16
Awesome story sad to see it ending but I hope you will consider creating a new one from where you left off! Still its is a very good ending to this story.
nightwind83
2009-12-07 . chapter 16
i love the epilogue. it's a nice sweat ending. hope to be seeing more from you.
DiscipleOfAnime
2009-12-07 . chapter 16
I'm so glad I found this story when it first came out. Loved this story a lot!

-Stay Gold
Majime Noubenka
2009-12-07 . chapter 16
I enjoyed your Naruto story very much, and I do hope you venture into this fandom again soon. Great job on a great story.
Rose Tiger
2009-12-07 . chapter 16
Wonderful ending! Best fanfic ever!
taintedlegacy
2009-12-07 . chapter 16
Awesome run! Great job!
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