 Super naruto 14 2009-12-08 . chapter 16 Dude the fic was awesmene cant wait for next one. |
 Kunoichi-Shea 2009-12-07 . chapter 16Yay! Thank you for writing such a wonderful story! I really enjoyed reading it! It was absolutely adorable! |
 kawaiigurl93 2009-12-07 . chapter 16i loved the different perspective of the story! nice add to the ending! the story was great throughout! LOVED IT |
 oceanmoon 2009-12-07 . chapter 1So cute I hate stories that move way too fast. You're doing a good job. |
 Andy Wong Fey Hong 2009-12-07 . chapter 4Sorry mate, I should have reviewed from Chapter 1, but I'm only doing it now for Chapter 4. This is easily one of the best stories I've read so far. What struck me is the slow, gradual and realistic pace your taking Naruto and Hinata's relationship. I'll admit that I was hoping for an instant lemon when I read your story but in this chapter, I'm glad you haven't, and I'm astounded by this chapter.
Especially Neji's line:
... I'll cut off your head, and I don't mean the one above your shoulders!
God, that nearly had me laughing my head off. Brilliant, utterly brilliant, is that something you came up with yourself, or is it a line from somewhere else?
I loved this chapter also in that it dealt with both Naruto's and Hinata's realistic fears for the future of their relationship instead of just diving into the lovey dovey aspetcs. Which by the way, you ended spectacularly with.
The last line with Tenten was also funny, although uncharacteristic of Naruto who is usually too dense to notice his surroundings.
take care. will try to review more as I read though. |
 CandyGirl999 2009-12-07 . chapter 16It was a great story. I'm just sorry to see it end... |
 Dalaion 2009-12-07 . chapter 16Really awesome fanfic,its a shame that ended, but great work!
XD |
 pho 2009-12-07 . chapter 6 It's very good... I love this story...
NaruHina forever! |
 RPGuy777 2009-12-07 . chapter 16sequal? great story by the way |
 FenriGod 2009-12-07 . chapter 16Awesome story sad to see it ending but I hope you will consider creating a new one from where you left off! Still its is a very good ending to this story. |
 nightwind83 2009-12-07 . chapter 16i love the epilogue. it's a nice sweat ending. hope to be seeing more from you. |
 DiscipleOfAnime 2009-12-07 . chapter 16I'm so glad I found this story when it first came out. Loved this story a lot!
-Stay Gold |
 Majime Noubenka 2009-12-07 . chapter 16I enjoyed your Naruto story very much, and I do hope you venture into this fandom again soon. Great job on a great story. |
 Rose Tiger 2009-12-07 . chapter 16Wonderful ending! Best fanfic ever! |
 taintedlegacy 2009-12-07 . chapter 16Awesome run! Great job! |