really good story both of them. i think u should do a third. oh andbtw i loved her name!

OMG

there must be a third please... ahahah!
i am really getting into this and ur writting is pretty awesome so yea.. there must be a third LOL

wolf wolf... different but i like it

THIRD! AHAHA!
maybe something like a couple of years or months down the track! something happens with zeev and john.. or whom ever lol...
i dont know your the writter and what you write is pretty damn good so good luck, hopefully everyone will see a third out there sometime soon:D

i would love a third story and how about Forever Myself for a title

Great story, I hope there is a trilogy. I don't have anything for a title right now, but if I come up with anything, I will message you.

yes, please make it a trilogy! :)

the end?
I feel like this would be a cute place to end it, but I want more haha

you could end it here, but if you think it could keep going, by all means, continue! This has been a wonderful story.

You could always do another sequel and make a trilogy

I could see you ending the story here or doing another sequel if you wanted to. It could really go either way. You could even continue on if you really wanted too!

NO BABY?! I've heard of that happening...thank you so much for updating!! I was at a wrestling show last night so I couldnt read them till today!

There definitely should be more lol Great update

Awesome update!

'So what do you think? Should this be the end of the story? Or should there be more…?'

I am appaulled that you would ask that... OF COURSE THERE SHOULD BE MORE! LOL

I am really getting into this story.. i'd like to see more about John and Zeev (Weird name!,though i like it! but where did you come up with it?) Maybe something with his parents and his family for a few chapters... I don't know your the writer.. but it's awesome!!

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Oh please let there be more i love both of these stories and i wanna see what happens between john and zeev

Great update, I can't wait for more.

aww that sucks that she wasnt pregnant... but i guess its better lol they havent really been together that long.
good chapter, as always :)