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The Blood Thirsty Sliver Wolf
2009-12-04 . chapter 1
Even better than the Reunion! When's the next one? What's it going to be called? I can't wait to read it, it just keeps getting better and better! Oh and whats with Saskue? Update when you can... I'm going to be greedy for once, UPDATE SOON!
angel897
2009-11-19 . chapter 1
love it please keep writing
CherryBlossims226
2009-11-16 . chapter 1
SO GOOD! XD There should be a sequal sequal <<

-Lauren Of The Lake
Eldr-Fire
2009-11-15 . chapter 1
Ha ha, this was fun! Poor Kakashi... ;)

Only criticism is that Kakashi's official least favorite food is tempura. However, it's a pretty small piece of information that not everyone knows... and it worked fine here, ha ha! This was fun to read! :)

Eldr
xxxfallenskyxxx
2009-09-18 . chapter 1
Aw, poor Kakashi. I love the interaction in this chapter.
Mrs. Story
2009-09-09 . chapter 1
Aww, poor Kakashi. ;) Sucka.
wintersalad
2009-09-06 . chapter 1
lol. i forgot to comment on this when i read 'the centerpiece,' but i really love the way you write kakashi's PoV.

and just a thought. are you attempting to do all 50 themes? it might be nice if you placed it all together. that way, you wouldn't need to incorporate a short summary of what happened earlier in the beginning.
les-liaisons-dangereuses
2009-08-22 . chapter 1
Ha ha, I liked this one. Is there a sequel?
AmaterasuFaia
2009-06-30 . chapter 1
Cute story, I love the last part about the banana dipping. Can't wait for the next one.
mannd1068
2009-06-29 . chapter 1
I think she is doing it on purpose, poor Kakashi doesn't stand a chance.
Scarlet Amaranth
2009-06-17 . chapter 1
I'm not usually into Kakashi x Sakura, but wow, this was awesome~

Bwahahaha! Poor Kakashi XD
XxBloodyRiverxX
2009-06-13 . chapter 1
NO! THIS CAN'T BE THE END! I WANT TO READ MORE! Oh well, maybe you'll do another sequal, or another chapter? (irresistable kitty eyes) Pwease? This was awesome though
eninaej
2009-06-02 . chapter 1
hilarious! will you be making a sequel to this as a part of the 50 shinobi themes? I'm looking forward to seeing more of your writing :)
AB
2009-05-22 . chapter 1
Ah, ha! Perverts. Bananas. And Kaka-sensei. Interesting combo. :)
LovelySillyPINK
2009-05-21 . chapter 1
LOl
somethings never change
Kakashi will always be a perv.
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