 Nile's Daughter 2009-11-13 . chapter 21this was a satisfying conclusion to your story, though i'm a little sad that it's over now...but, yes, a great ending to a great (and hilarious) story |
 Belmene 2009-11-08 . chapter 21Good story! I hope you will write many others with Amelia and Ronon! |
 Mechia132 2009-11-08 . chapter 21You have a great story. I love it thank you so much for it. Keep up your writing. |
 Senrab Nomis 2009-11-08 . chapter 21You know you write some brilliant McKeller moments. And thank you for this final installment although it is a shame its over, sequal?
Its nice how they can all get together for christmas, who knows maybe you could write about some of their other get togethers and expand on what we know about the families, you certainly did a good job of doing that with the Shepperd clan, it would be nice to see the others christmas morning. |
 Shadows-of-Realm 2009-11-08 . chapter 21That was a truly hilarious and amazing story! Keep up the writing!! |
 Eplen91 2009-11-08 . chapter 21I feel so bad, that I haven’t reviewed lately, so I hope that you will forgive me. It’s so much to do at school and I have been busy with my German Exam that I’m going to have tomorrow.
Aww! What a cute Chapter! This chapter really got me in a Christmas mood. I’m not a Teyla/Sheppard fan, but I loved it. I loved the whole story, from chapter 1 to chapter 21! :P To bad it’s finished |
 Jeyla4ever 2009-11-03 . chapter 20 This was very cute and well thought of. I would have liked more of Teyla in there but the fact that she's Sheppard's wife, is fine with me.
Thank you. |
 Senrab Nomis 2009-11-03 . chapter 20It may not be the final chapter but thank you for rounding off the story with a great chapter. Us Mckeller fans really apreciate it. |
 Mechia132 2009-11-02 . chapter 20This is so funny and looking forward to the next chapter. |
 Shadows-of-Realm 2009-11-02 . chapter 20That was admittedly odd but still nice!
Can't wait for the ending! |
 Shadows-of-Realm 2009-10-25 . chapter 19You didn't kill Lorne! GOod job! I'm loving it and expecting an epilogue soon! |
 Senrab Nomis 2009-10-25 . chapter 19Hello its me known to the author as anonymous reviewer, although not really that anonymous since i did write my name.
Nice installment looking forward to the next, and point well made i get what you were saying, you can't lock someone up for being angry and if he had escaped he may have blown up the city. And i get why you didn't just close the iris, the future might change the athosians may not have attacked, pity about the dead though. Thank you for saving Lorne and a big thank you for the Mckeller. |
 Mechia132 2009-10-25 . chapter 19this was great to read. keep you your writing. |
 Senrab Nomis 2009-10-20 . chapter 18 Its a very good story and all but i just cannot see Shepperd or Woolsey willing to sacrifice the lives of so many for the sake of someone who they do not know for sure is going to die, surely they could have merely put Kanaan in a holding cell. |
 Shadows-of-Realm 2009-10-19 . chapter 18What? You killed Lorne! Again?
That's rough man! Come on, give the guy a break! |