Very good story.

Alright, glad you got some inspiration again! Interesting scene with the half living, half dead kinda thing. I'm looking forward to seeing where you might go with this story. There were a few spelling errors, etc. and it felt a bit rushed, but otherwise good job :D

Great chapter, I'd like to read more.

As long as you are back and going to update this story again then I am happy. When it comes to who is my favorite couple from The Godfather Vincent and Mary is one of them. Whenever I watch the scene of Mary dying it just break my heart. By creating this story it's like you are giving Mary a second chance. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP.

P.S. Vincent and Mary Forever

Even though I thought Vinnie and Mary were a really weird couple, I like your story. Are you planning on continuing it?

Y'all shouldn't be saying that this is great writing. Barely any of it is Flack's Angel's work. This was already written by Mario Puzzo; you just had narration in between.

Great story, I'm glad Mary didn't die. I hope you write more!

Good story. Hated Mary's death at the end.

Please please please keep writing this story!

Holy shit that was amazing. Your a talented writer.

Beautifuly written and very emotive, mary's death was always upsetting