you should make more stories like this! (sobsobsob)

sweet, sweet, sweet!)

it is veary good sorry if i spelled eny thing wronge

Hmm...A traditional cliché...with most of the cliché cut out...Very interesting...Hee...Nice poemic thingy...Erm...Heheh...Tat's all...*_*;

Awww...how sweet! You are good at poetry But just to reassure you, I like your short stories too, because whether it's a poem or a short story, they've both got lots of emotion in them. Good job! _