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Eclips-MoonShadowRadiance
2009-12-23 . chapter 2
lol its a pretty good story i loved it, it would have been nice to see what the wedding would have been like but aw well. Lol once again great story

Happy Holidays

ShikaXD
smiley95
2009-12-13 . chapter 2
oh ma gosh, this story is one helluva story! its soo freaking damn awzum! i just love how it is so damn long and **! i barely finished it lol it took meh bout like 4 days kuz they will kick meh outta the pc and **. and that lemon?? damn, that thing is the **! its so damn sexy and hawt! and i just love the ending knowing that they ended up getting married, tho the part i wanted to see was wen they noticed that kakashi ** the brains outta naruto!! like, i wanted to read how it was they went about, you know? like, since they practically passed out on the kitched floor, i would imagine kakashi being all like Whha?? and naruto be all stuttering but then they will confess and all, you kno? anywayz, i love it dahling! lol :D! i especially love this part in the kitchen scene (wich is soo damn ** hott!!):

“Ah! You’re a pervert!” He pointed at the man laying his head on his hip accusingly, and Kakashi simply chuckled again.

“Duh,” he agreed and turned his head to nip the teen’s hipbone. Naruto yelped and tugged his hair.

Suddenly, Kakashi got to his knees and started shrugging his vest off and reaching for his shirt.

“Wh-what are you doing?” Naruto asked curiously.

“I’m going to ** you,” Kakashi easily explained.

“Oh.”

hahah i love it!
DragonRider-Xankira
2009-09-25 . chapter 1
"Y-you have dimples."

That line made me crack up! God, that was hilarious.

Wow, this fic is amazing! It had a lovely mix of angst that didn't make it feel like it was drowning in self-pity. (It also appeals to my angsty nature). I loved the awkward moments and drama, they were fantastic. This fic is beautiful.

Now I must sleep, for me it's 3 AM.
-siarafaerie-101-miss
2009-09-25 . chapter 2
it was very good, i especially loved the lemon!
look forward to more kakanaru fan fics!
=)
crumbs02
2009-09-22 . chapter 2
haha read your pet peeves on your profile... love you combination of angst and sexual tension. rawwrr. keep it up! or else.. =]
yates
2009-09-22 . chapter 1
wow!! gotta love the kakanaru lovin
unwanted- angel
2009-09-19 . chapter 2
i think i liked this ending even more than the first one.

only thing is, this one made me cry. it made me happy, that he asked naruto to marry him, soo sweet!!
unwanted- angel
2009-09-18 . chapter 1
i don't think i've ever been more obsessed with a story in my entire life. it took me about 2 days to finish this, and even when i was finally done, i didn't want it to end.

Thank You. T.T
sexykakashi99
2009-09-02 . chapter 2
*grins manicly!* well i must say that was rather ** HOT!
god i wish i was a fly on the wall in this story! i think i would die happy if i could see that lol
and i love the rest of the fic i thought it was cute
^^
evanescenceangel18
2009-09-01 . chapter 2
Oh My ** Gosh! This chapter was ** HOT! I totally loved it. Wow this chapter was ** hot and I totally loved it. Like wow I still cant believe it that it was so ** HOT! Anyways love you dear. XD
Killing Curse Eyes
2009-08-29 . chapter 2
I liked it. Both versions, even though I skipped the lemon. :3 I really like your writing style, and how you portray Kakashi and Naruto. Awesome work, DetoxAngel-san. :3
Toki Mirage
2009-08-24 . chapter 2
I was disappointed u skipped the morning after scene. those are always deliciously awkward. *sulks*

But other than that, AWESOME FIC! I loved it. And it's complete! Yay!

Mirage
Juls-emo
2009-08-24 . chapter 2
well i thought that the first part was cute ..
but he second part .. well *dirty grin* hihi the Lemon was great ! I love the story and Kakashi is so sweet i would most cerntenly take care of him, hähä .. ''take care'' *getting dirty thoughts again* aw.. i love kakashi so much .. ^^ well i gotta add this story to my favs ^^ go on with the good work !!
Crimson Aries
2009-08-08 . chapter 1
Omg, that was fantastic! I seriously was on edge all work, becuase I never got to finish the story, and this was the only thing I was thinking about! I'm so glad it was amazing! You have talent!!

Take care ::):):):):):):):):)
Mrs Hatake Itachi
2009-07-16 . chapter 1
Nice story!
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