Well, I liked that.

I just have one thing to point out- The hobgoblin is in the ULTIMATE Spiderman series, not the SPECTACULAR Spiderman. What's going on? Are you going to continue it?

Great One-shot

Hey, this was pretty good! Your descriptions were perfect and the flow of the story was well done. My favorite though were all the dialogues. Very natural and kind of reminds me of powerful movie dialogues. You captured the stereotypical comic-style goons pretty well and the plot was very simple--my favorite kinds of oneshots. Keep up the great work. :)