Ah, this is such a sweet little story, and so beautifully written. I really like the summer atmosphere and shy, innocent Logan.
Thanks.

Awesome story! It's written really well! Great job!

Just beautiful...

Loved your take on a young, sweet, naive Logan, and it's an interesting take on how he met Valerie.

Thanks for the story, it does the soul good to read some Logan fluff every now and then!

Awesome!

Excellent characterization, and although I've never really thought about a parallel with Logan and Dalton before, now that you point it out, I sense the possibilities.

I like it a lot.

Oh, this is so sweet and perfect, all of it. Also must be the sweetest, most innocent way I’ve seen so far for Logan meeting Valerie.

"It had taken zero-point-seven seconds to determine the basics and nearly a year to gather his courage and make a move."
So many images of sweet, young Logan (and they’re even intensified by the careless summer-ocean-vacation feeling), lingering around not yet having the courage to act upon his feelings, being so focused and flustered at the same time in his uniform…

"Logan smiled fondly at the memory, shook it off and continued to watch Dalton bumble and blush as the female Transgenic he'd been eyeing made yet another sweep of the room and came back to stand next to the teen."
A perfectly sweet moment in itself, but even more so in hindsight and with the parallelism of the same thing happening in Terminal City after or Santa Monica before the Pulse.

Thanks for this, made Logan shipper heart very happy.
(I need to start paying better attention to RH prompts again, really like this one)

Aw, I thought it was adorable and realistic. Great job with the characterizations; awesome ficlet. ^_^

Shay, I love you for this!

Very sweet; very Logan, and very well done. Such a delight to read -- I knew you had it in you!

Thanks for coming over to this side for a look around (;}) We'd love to have you come back & stay a while... :D