i guess that means Kai's gonna be the one getting f*ed tonight xD. Great story, Tala is so cute and spazzy and Kai is so hot *drools* ...ahem... right... great job xD

hahahhaaha... I luved it so much it's lik I read it lik 10 times and I still lik it! GREAT WORKS I HEARTS IT oui oui!
U hav a very creative brain, u should write more!

I luved it wen Tala was lik all spazzy and Kai's just like watever...XD,tipical yet hysterical lol.

J'aime adore le HUMOR! XD.

oh yes, and sry bout the dissaperaence lately, I hope u had a good time wen Im gone (sniff sniff)... kidding, But I do hope u r having awsome dayz yes yes that I do! Im trying to put up yaoi pics, but my mind is locked for some reason, any suggestion themes Em? And christmas is nearing soon so maybe a christmas theme of Kai and Tala yaoi mm...

Anyways, Loved the work, even if I read it lik a huge number of times XD.
Keep it up dude!

That's great. The Nurse looked at Kai. That would suck, she just totally read them like a book.
The chocolate was great and the part where Tala's on the toilet.
"Sanitary Towels, please." <- That's great.

I told my sister and she laughed with me.
She laughed at the whole thing with me.

Heya Mika here, again I laughed so much during this one-shot, I think these kinds of fics are fucking fantastic. Poor Tala, oh well it looks like Kai will be going uke for a while. Keep up the fantastic work and please update soon. XXMikaXX

is kai dom here?

haha the end was the best!!

"Tala gave Kai a playful slap.

“See? I told you I wasn’t having a period!”"

HAHAHa

LOL! OH MY GOD THAT WAS BRILL! so funy just what i needed i've been feeling down latly

lol, totally hilarious... and a very unique idea too (Tala having a 'period' lol)keep up the good work

“See? I told you I wasn’t having a period!”

LMFAO! I love that sentence! I loads of people that do that! It's so funny!

I hate periods. The pain! :'(

Men should suffer with it xD

Never thought someone would write a fanfic about period... about a guy having a period... hilarious!

Yup; i was right about you being the ONLY person in the world who could come up with this xD

Poor Kai having to buy sanitary towels! And bless him for not knowing about the 'skirts'

I thought this was oddly sweet...apart from the bleeding arse part...that was just amusing :)

WahWAH!!

WAH I TELL YOU!

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LMFAO!
tala does have PMS sometimes...but period... xD

“See? I told you I wasn’t having a period!” LOL

lmao. Another totally random, totally hilarious story=) I love the ending with Tala going: "See, I told you..." So funny xD

Hi

Tala on a period?
thats funny!

hmm, I wonder what could have happened to make Tala bleed?
lol


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