I like all of these.

wow this was really well written. I love the different songs representing different sins it was well thought out. Shame you dont like haru/Michi they are good lol i thnk any girl couple in Sailor Moon is good really.

I hope you write more!

I realy want to know. I've always felt that Usagi and Haruka were a better match anyway

Nice story. I liked the format and its one of the first Haruka/Usagi stories I've read that I thought was good (I love the pairing, just haven't found many good fics).

I'd be very interested in hearing your theory about Haruka and Michiru.

i love the story. i love usagiharuka please write more !

That was great. And while I don't share your views on Michiru I do have to agree that with or without Mamoru she would be great with Haruka.

You said this was your first fic in the Sailor Moon Universe I am hoping it won't be your only.

Haruka and Michiru are my fav Sailor Moon cannon couple but I love Usagi and Haruka together too (I like too many of the Senshi with each other - way too many fan pairings going on). I really need to write a fic about them. This was great.

brilliant story!
very different to most of the SM fics I read which makes for a nice change ;)
great job! x

A very good story.
Haruka/Usagi is one of my favorite ships in SM.

You managed to balance the story perfectly and I liked the way you had the feelings grow through the fic and then the pillow-talk at the end.

And the five deadly sins as markers, so very nice.

Good luck with the writing
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I loved it!
It's so unusual way of writing about those too... yet so good!
Succinct phrases, only outlines of the situations, great dialogues... I loved it!

I hope to read more of your writing for Haruka and Usagi because... well, because your style of this fic... makes my heart throb almost painfully with pleasure :)

I liked the Haruka you pictured. She's close to her canon self, and yet a bit more open which only adds charms to her personality :)

Great job! Please write more :))

P.S. Oh, and I really want to know your theory about why Haruka doesn't like Michiru that much. Or writing a PM is the only way to ask about it? ;))

this was pretty cool. Ive never read anything like this before. thanks

I read this purely because the idea is pure genius and innovative.

I like it.

BUT I like the HM pairing more, so I was horrified from the beginning.