I enjoyed this! continue!

oh i love this story! you are making a lot of fangirls happy! keep up the good work! ;3

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Awesome! You finally came out with another one!

Shoet but sweet! I still want to see Tyki, even though I doubt it'll get that far
haha, keep up the great work!

_YAY Another good chapter! KROWLEY PUT HIS HAND ON MY SHOULDR OMG -melts-...I'm not a rabid fangirl what are you talking about ... Anyway I can't for the next chapter!_

Crimson-Moon-Beams (a.k.a. Nikoru-chan)

yeah, so why is everyone dead in this chicks family? RANDOM! oh, and the writer, YEAH, she is SHORT! hehehe

it's great! i've finally found a fic where i'm in it!)keep up the good work! ;3

somehow, this amuses me soon? :D

This is great! Your doing awesome!

Haha, Krowley broke a plate! XD

He's so funny.

Anyways, great job! Please keep updating lots!

o i wanna try this! O.O

_Hey Alchemist-chan! It's me Nikoru-chan! Yay for chapter and YAY KROWLEY! OMG HE'S IN IT AND HE TOUCHED MY SHOULDER O3O 3 That was awesome I can't waitr for the next chapter!_

Crimson-Moon-Beams (a.k.a. Nikoru-chan)

This is a great start to a fanfic! I can't wait to read the rest. I like how it gives you choices, too. This'll be fun!

Fantasy Shadow

Haha! That was great. :D Lavi's pranks never cease to amuse me.

What makes this even more awesome, is that everything she says practically comes straight out of my mouth! :D It makes it seem so much more realistic for me.

Update soon, kay? :D

_Hey Alchemist-chan! Nikoru-chan is back! This is so much fun! I have never had this much fun reading a fanfic before...not that i read many but you get the point! I want Krowley to come in! I think I may be the only Krowley fangirl . If there are any more that would be awesome...BUT KROWLEY IS MINE MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Yeah I'm ok _

Crimson-Moon-Beams (a.k.a. Nikoru-chan)

Have i ever told you how much i love you? well i do! I can't wait to read more! AND to meet Kanda! I'll end up with him, just you wait... but anyways it's awesome, and your awesome, and kanda's awesome, and i'm awesome...yeah ok i'll stop, but it is amazing! see ya! by the way, PARTY WITH A PURPOSE TOMORROW! YAY!

This is frickin awesome! pardon my language, by I like the idea of this story, I never thought that someone would be creative and actually do a story like this. YOU ROCK!