 Lindethiel 2010-01-05 . chapter 7 Oh, I'm really glad to see this back alive! It's such a great and different story!
I hope you'll be able to update more?
Interesting to see Sal digging up Anakin's past, I do wonder how he'll take that during the interviews... I expect the twins don't know much about their father's past either.
I'm looking forward to seeing this (maybe?) active again! |
 ILDV 2010-01-04 . chapter 7You are welcome. Thanks, this is a very wonderful gift for christmas and new year.
Woderful chapter. ROTFL! Vader's adorable... ROTFL... |
 Jedi Ani Unduli 2010-01-01 . chapter 7Ooh!! They'd BETTER not tell Vader that! He'd definitely lose it then! ;-)
Very good. Language: Good. Storyline: Good. You're good 2 continue. Oh, heck, what am I saying? This is UR story, U can work on it no matter what I say!
Still... More, please? |
 VFSNAKE 2010-01-01 . chapter 7That's interesting. Keep going! |
 Jedigal125 2010-01-01 . chapter 7 Lol vader was adorable :p |
 sexyninjalady 2010-01-01 . chapter 7 I'm still here.And I'm still loving it!Keep it coming! |
 en-glace 2010-01-01 . chapter 7I was wondering when you were going to post this. I love this story so much and hope you'll be writing more. (And I promise to catch you on AIM again sometime soon.)
<3 |
 Padawan Nik 2010-01-01 . chapter 7 *waves hand* I'm still reading this story.
Honestly I've been checking every other day for an update for this for weeks now. It's a premis that could so easily be taken into the realms of cliche or OOC, but you manage to make it work.
I love your Vader.
I love your Luke (and his optimism).
I love your OC's (which is kind of crazy because my general rule towards OC's is "no", but again, you make it work).
This is a well written, satisfying story and I hope you keep working on it, even if it seems like your readers aren't responding.
Oh, and OMFG, Vader was the cutest kid in the galaxy for sure! That can't be denied, no matter how you feel about him as a grown man! |
 badkidoh 2009-12-31 . chapter 7Yet another great chapter so update soon. |
 SongoftheDarquePhoenix 2009-12-31 . chapter 7... this is new. I admit, I'm interested to see where you go with this! |
 phantom-jedi1 2009-12-31 . chapter 7While I did have to re-read the previous chapters, I didn't forget about this one. How could I? It's one of my favorites: witty, yet keeping everyone very much in character.
Do keep writing! I look forward to the next installment. :)
Happy New Year!
Phantom Jedi |
 Bandi 2009-10-04 . chapter 6 OH JEEZ, this is fantastic. I really hope you update soon, this is a great story. I really feel for Anakin, the way you write him makes him totally in character.
Can't wait to read more! |
 badkidoh 2009-05-14 . chapter 6another great chapter, i look forward to your next update |
 Ani 2009-05-12 . chapter 6 Wow. Sweet! More? |
 ILDV 2009-05-12 . chapter 6A very scared makeup girl approached Vader, powder-puff in hand. He turned the full force of his glare on her, and she squeaked.
“Do not even contemplate it.”
“But—“
“No excuses!”
“Sir, just a little…”
OMG! ROTFL! Very GREAT!
This was too much to bear. The camera lingered on Vader’s face for a moment, as color began to rush to his cheeks, before the image dissolved. Bland music played over the familiar voice of the New Republic News Network’s announcer recited the familiar message: ‘unforseen technical events have taken us off the air temporarily, please wait one moment while we sort things back out’…
Ferron slapped his projector a few times before cursing it in four major trade languages. Moments later, hoarse but slightly mollified, he returned to his datapad and began typing furiously.
GREAT. Nola ss a lucky person...
Very very very GOOD. chapter. |