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Kichi Penn
2009-04-26 . chapter 1
Hm...

Didn't Thad kill Bart? And didn't Wally go pycho on him and freeze him? Do I want a peice of cinnomin toast?

Yes, Yes, AND YES!

I demand you go and make me some toast. I like it crunchy.

And I like this story. But that doesn't mean, just cuz you wrote it, that you are not supposed to go and make me some toast.

NOW! *frothes at the mouth*
PhinalPhantasy
2009-04-25 . chapter 1
Great job on this one buddy. I think Impulse deserves his own fic written by you after this one if you're looking for story ideas :)
JuseaPeterson
2009-04-21 . chapter 1
I'm really glad that you wrote this. I don't know why but I think one of my favorites from reading your story is Inertia. I felt so bad for him here. Poor guy, I thought that Black Tiger showing up was interesting, maybe just what he needs...

I liked the eulogy he gave, it was very nicely said.

Great job on this. As for your sequel...I'm honestly not sure. I'm sorry, but if I think of something I'll let you know.

Talk to you later.
Superspyder CJ
2009-04-20 . chapter 1
Well, that was a nice way to cap off the Titans NY storyline. I really like how everyone was there for Inertia and no one dogged him just because he's a bad guy.

I remember seeing Sin in your Ardent story. Was this supposed to be a tie-in to that?

As for the sequel, I have three suggestions:

1) Teen Titans: War of Light-The Titans have to help Kyle Rayner and the other GL's battle the Red Lanterns, the Sinestro Corps, and Agent Orange.

2) Teen Titans: Born in Blood-Brother Blood(the vampire kid version) tries to ressurect Trigon, and uses Jericho's corrupted soul to do it.

3) Teen Titans: The New Kids-Robin gathers a new group of Titans, including Static, Miss Martian, and Blue Beetle, to stop Professor Ivo from unleashing his new creation-Red Disaster! They also fight other bad guys, as well.

Those are just a few suggestions. PM me if you need any help, and good luck!

-CJ
anon
2009-04-20 . chapter 1
Okay that was cool not really cool with making a villain go hero just like that and was kind of hoping you'd say a little more how Ineritia and Sun Girl were in love but villains and hereos are emotionally withdrawn

Young Outsiders a love it so the black ops of the Justice League getting a junior division so Inertia might fit in better here

Villains are the conflict which is what makes the story

So Ardent isn't the sequel or do you not know where you are going with it

Either way maybe you could do like Marvel's Dark Reign the bad guys have won everyone cheering them on Luthor bringing his cure for cancer end famine giving everyone superpowers and non polluting futuristic technology into space colonies so the earth not overpopulated become president set his cabinet, joint chiefs, and directors of FBI etc. with villian dream team I've mentioned maybe Bane takes over his home country and leads it to economic futuristic technologically advance cheered by the people

Or maybe the junior bad guys I mentioned could just try to kill them pound them into the ground or like Bane destroy their lives and/or reputations

I like Sin I think she'd be a good love interest for Damian maybe

Please udpate soon
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