amazing but i like your story Lover Seeked better

hey girl! please continue with the story...

this is really good, i like how you showed V and Emma's Struggle to understand each other because of their connections to Vio. ~WR

more please

more please and as quick as possible please

this isn't meant to be insulting just some helpful criticism... your idea sounds very interesting and it has tons of promise, but i have to say that at this point many of the sentences don't exactly flow mainly because of small grammatical errors. I thought you might like to know. Sorry if you would've rather i kept my mouth shut but I'm on a new streak of honestly reviewing every story i read. good luck!

woah wait a sec hold up stop! do they know each other?!! more please and fast

Nice start, very interesting =)