Oh my gosh. This was a great way to continue. I liked how much came out when Sammy was around, even if he didn't understand what was going on.

Oh wow. I really liked how you set this up and it all came out once John realized why Dean was feeling as poorly as he was. That was some awesome fatherlyness coming out of him at the end.

Aww, this is so adorable. Poor Dean, but I'm so happy you wrote John to be a great father here, finally figuring it out and then taking care of his boy. And little Sammy...eep! He's so cute, so perfect. Very nicely done, thank you!

Don't you love a sweet Sam and caring Dad. Both a little lost of taking care of Dean, but loved the ending with Sam whispering don't worry I won't eat your pie. He knows his brother. :)

Good job. Go John Winchester!

Awww cute *_*

Well, if John had acted like that Dean probably wouldn't fell that guilty now, would he? The poor kid blame himself all the time but he was too little to have to deal with all this BS

Good one D

Little Sammy is cute

See you around

Rosetta

Dang it, you're making me tear up here.

I love this! it's so sad and sweet at the same time. And it was done really well. i just love it. :]
- *Courtnee'*

Oh man. It's been a while since I read this, and found it here, and now I'm all sniffly. Poor wee!Dean. At least John saw what had happened finally. And sweet lil!Sammy, with the shake and the pie.

::wipes eyes::

Cutest story ever. Adore the ending!

This is beautiful hunny, thank you so much for sharing! I love the insight you've given us to the winchester family, I think you've written john perfectly - I love the way you've melded his gruff, big-bad-hunter, haunted-widower and fatherly, adores-his-kids sides together into such a great, realistic, multi-facted character. and the secretary totally made me laugh! you're wonderful! thank you so much again! your stories totally bring this fandom to life.

I love the story! It's so cute and sad and awesome. The Dean/John is perfect and Sam is so cute. Keep up the good work!

(And more chapters to this story would be even more awesome)

Why didn't I alert your story?

Okay... I've reaf it :D:D

And it was awesome... really cute...#Please continue.

I really loved this - It made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside also It made me feel all sad - had to disguise the tear tracks running down my face - I think you should UN -complete this and add more chapters - Pretty Please!

Ohh man you're killing me with this story I don't want it to end. I know u were just planning a one chapter thing but pls do something this is just to awesoeme. The way u write the boys and John's realationship with them, Dean's fear it's so great. And the last part with Sam, that just about finished me. Can't u just make Dean worse that he is so u can stretch it a bit longer, I'm not to proud to beg for more chapters u know. I just love reading this and the sick Dean is just bonus

Dani