|Reviews for Dawn of the Kingdom|
| M 8/21/09 . chapter 5
I'm loving the chapters so far! PLEASE continue! Your writing is amazing and you're staying so true to the characters. Can't wait to read more!
| jojobevco 8/19/09 . chapter 5
| ThePinkLady16 6/24/09 . chapter 3
OMG I luved it, I'm working on a fic. I don't know if it's anygood :)
| eleanor44 6/22/09 . chapter 3
I sort of missed a scene where we could see David with his mother and brothers and this was really well written, but what i liked more were the Michelle/David scenes, hope you continue it, now that David has to attend the dinner
| eleanor44 4/28/09 . chapter 1
I've started reading some Kings fanfiction (i'm a David/Michelle shipper) and i really liked this one, specially how David is that sincere with her and they have nothing to hide, i'd love to see it updated
| pbjtime567 4/21/09 . chapter 1
please please please continue your story, it rocks!
| Blebo92 4/21/09 . chapter 1