Once again excellent Chapter.
BTW how do like my new penname?
God Bless You.

Wow epic battle. So I'm guessing that all the Star Sapphires are women. If they are the Violet Lanterns and they represent love, why is the Star Sapphire I know and love from JL a villain instead of a hero?

Pretty good. Not like totally fantastic like last chapter, but good. Glad you got the Star Sapphires into the fray; I didn't think they would show up.
Congrats on 4 years of fan fiction!

Wow, that was pretty interesting. I wonder what's going to happen and if everything will turn out fine.

Oh my goodness graciousness, this one was full of awesomeness! Nice way to get back into the action with the Gold/Green/Red Lantern war and the introduction of the Star Sapphire Corps. The Red Lanterns throwing up blood was both creepy and cool at the same time. I actually forgot Carol Ferris was a Star Sapphire. So Grant can create constructs out of his ring? Interesting. And what do the Red and Gold Lanterns want with the Zamaron power battery? Guess I'll just have to wait and find out.

Great job, as always!

-CJ

P.S. You might want to check out the Justice League: Crisis on Two Worlds trailer. It was so AWESOME! And Deathstroke is the President!

Alright Grant

Aw, that was really good. A very touching chapter. And Kyle's padre in the CIA? I don't know if it's in the comics or not, but if it is, it was cool of you to put in in there. If it, waita go making it up.

I like how you handled the funeral and how Kyle was feeling. Interesting about his father.

You really had the feel of a funeral in it and you did a good job.

Very well done on this one. I learned a lot about Kyle thanks to this one :)

Ah man, that was intense! To see your father, who ran out on you, come back into your life when your mom has died...yeah, I can understand why Kyle's P.O.'ed. Great chapter!

As for the storyline, I agree it's very expansive. However, I have faith that you can pull it off. It just takes time and patience (none of which I have at the moment).

Keep up the good work!

-CJ

Nice not my cup of tea but good

Have you heard of the comic series The Boys it's awesome!

-superflyingtacklepounce-

YOU DID IT! YOU DIDN'T MESS UP THE ENTIRE STORY! YAY!

My favorite part was this: The following morning was his mother’s funeral. As he stood clad in a black suit while mourners passed by the coffin. They offered their condolences to him but he seemed almost immune to it. They didn’t know his mother, didn’t know how he felt. What he’d been through or how much he lost. The young Rayner just stood there next to the coffin. An older man placed his hand on his shoulder and squeezed it. He looked up and saw a bespectacled man in his fifties that was bald with gray hair and a goatee. It was his old art teacher.

I thought that was interesting- it caught me off gaurd. You should do more like that!

And this chapter was very much a filler, but it was one of the best fillers I've read, so no worries. :)

Also, you THANKED me! WHOO-HOO! I HAVE BEEN ACKNOWLEDGED!

I actually enjoyed this chapter because the Titans got to be a part of the action once again. the Red Lantern is one tough villain though and there's more where he came from. On a side note, I do believe that Roy is jealous.

You kind of slacked on this chapter, to tell you the truth.

Like, you mentioned "the city" a billion and one times at the beginning of the chapter, which drove my LOCO. And you said "looked at him/her" even more. You were like a broken record; stuck on "repeat."

Other than that, I liked this chapter okay. The Kyle-Donna-Aresenal triangle always makes for a good story.

Now, I just updated my story, so it's time for you to look at it. I was going to review this chapter before, but I decided to work on MBG before I did, because it would take me a while to read this.

Whoa- look at this review. It's long. I'd better get a good-sized review from you too, ya hear?

So I'm getting the Kyle-will-be-joining-the-Titans vibe from the first part. Black Hand's part actually made him kinda likeable, and I hope he resurfaces later.
All in all: not a super-eventful chapter, but not bad.