Enjoyed the story. More so since you chose to support it with thoughtful treatment of the human and spiritual quandaries Humankind has tried to come to grips with since the dawn of our awareness. Also liked the research you obviously put into the characters, rather than relying only on your imagination, not that it would have been a bad thing. It's kind of like the difference between your basic Timex watch and a handmade timepiece of high quality. They will both keep time well enough. The handmade one has extra features and finish details that make it a joy to use and to see.

Thank you very much for your story. I am saddened that you stated that you will not write another 'goddess' story, you are obviously quite talented and have much to give to the reading world. I wish you well in whatever future writing projects you undertake. Virgil Fisher

lol, i don't mind deviation or changes. that's wut i keep saying and i'll continue to say this: IT'S FANFICTION! ROAR! as to the manga... just so u kno, i never actually see any mention of other worldly beings as we known them. or i just don't read hard enough... wutever the case, it doesn't matter.

well, the chapter is very interesting. the Almighty is supposedly all knowing, or at least he has some way to gain information that is limited to everyone else. as to the name Almighty... i dont' kno why he call himself that or why people call him that either, but that's beside the case. the case if Daimakaicho Hild is very devious, or very manipulative... well, she's both, and u did her very well. of course, i always wonder if u believe she has a soft side for anyone else except Urd (and even then, she doesn't mind electricuting her). maybe a special scene depicting her playing with the children?

Blue Lance acts like Belldandy is, i believe partially due to the amount of time she spend next to her and partially becuz for a well, Blue Lance was inside Belldandy and somehow some part of her got transfered into her just as she is in sync with Holy Bell. as to the "Bell" look... wut does that look like?

speaking of Belldandy, nice job on interpretating her. she's overly nice, yes, but she can be mad; she is just very patient (remember wut happen when she's jealous? just imagine wut she'll be like when she is truely ticked off).

lastly... where is Keiichi? This story is started mainly on him, but now he's lacking screen time... hmm, u probably has a very good reason for that.

well, that is all i suppose. just keep up the good work and UPDATE SOON! (^.^)

PS: Nothing that isn't immediately repaired or buried? okay, i can take that, but what happen to the (especially considering who and wut we're dealing with) explosions and general mayhems that come with the oldest and youngest of the Norms?

A good end, sorry it took long to review, are you making any future stories of anything in particular.

I've really enjoyed your writing, and I did not find your story confusing at all, nor did I think that you treated these characters in any way that was disrespectful or even a poor representation of them.

That said, your biggest turn-off has been an overall bad attitude towards the 'fandom' and your readers. Most writers would be happy enough to know that someone's actually reading their work.

good ending. keep up the good work.

excellent chapter, hope you update soon.

I'm with Scott Pike.

The thing that bothers me is why you had to put all the characters through eight chapters of non-stop angst just to a)Make the sister goddesses into WHAT THEY ALREADY WERE (NORNS) and b)turn a little demon kid into an angel. The whole process of demoralizing intrigue was so out of kilter with the source material it almost hurt, making the business with the muffin-eating angels seem like you woke up one morning and realized "Oh wait! AMG is supposed to have some comedy in it once and a while!"

I've seen a lot of serious stuff on this page, but there should be a line between serious and maudlin.

IF that was the last chapter will somone please explain to me what the heck happend?

bil is an angel? I thought they controlled fate, the sisters Norn I mean.

If Kamisama is that incompentetn to create something, give it ultimate power and then no restrictions on it then he isn't omniscient and shouldn't be the ruling god.

It was kinda good but at the same time it was really confusing. Still a good fic all round.

Seems a little disjointed, but hardly fails because of it. Cant wait for your next one.

Do demons have angels in Ah/Oh My Goddess? Either way, I rather like this. I just really want to know how he became a demon and why. I would imagine that he'd want to be able to protect Belldandy and just kind of unknowingly followed the saying "the path to hell is paved with good intentions" and sold his soul or something. Hm...guess I'll find out later as I continue to read.

When you first began this story, you seemed like you doubted yourself. I've followed this since the first chapter and I must say that you have a very good knowledge base of this fandom. While I think it's very VERY creepy that Belldandy just gives Keiichi up like that (I mean she went back in time just to have him in love with her again for pete's sake!), This is YOUR story, so i'll respect that for what it is (and that is not intended to be a bad thing at all! I think what you've written is very creative and original).

I hope this isn't the end of this fanfic, or if it is you may want to consider following up with another... You obviously have the knack and talent to do so, I envy you a little...hopefully i'll be able to make my story half as good as yours!

Bravo,

Oldspice

Wow, i'm impressed at how well Belldandy is taking all this, heh, she might have a meltdown in the future who knows?

Epic story, is epic! It was a bit of an a surprise, really, to find a good OMG! story. But you did it, so kudos to you.