Oh, wow, this is just a *fantastic* story! I love it! Please keep writing! OK, too many exclaimation marks. But seriously, you have a real gift for writing. Oh, and what does that last sentence mean? The one in what I think is Latin.

hey great story funny and sweet i realy liked that line "i'm not screwing up-what do u mean, we"..." i knew eriol had some thing to do with this" i fond that so funny i can pictre him saying that please hurry up and finsh writing this i love it so far. :P

Kero-Chan! haha...that would be funny if it was. I like the fic so far, and can't wait to read more!

GR! too many cliff hangers, JadeWing! this sounds great, i can't wait to hear the next one!