 Baylink 2009-11-17 . chapter 1Nice.
A touch fanboy, but nice.
(See what I did, there? With the Captain Hammer riff? :-)
Incidentally, I just got done rereading the Auld Lang Syng->Scavenger Hunt cycle, and I thought I spotted several other pop culture riffs along the way, though damned if I was smart enough to write them down... :-) |
 Poa 2009-04-28 . chapter 1Came across this while surfing for my Award nominations... I love it! I'm not much for shipper stories, but this type of writing is slowly working its way into my mind. Thank you for writing! |
 jagged1 2009-04-23 . chapter 1Nope, no nauseousness here. I think most people on this site have built up a very high tolerance for Charah by now ; )
I think you captured exactly how it could have / should have ended. I like the way the Challenger was brought back in to the picture, and the trip outside the city - very nice. Thanks! |
 ewriter 2009-04-22 . chapter 1Aww, so cute. I am so sad thinking that they may go away! |
 Fire From Above 2009-04-22 . chapter 1Yay for fluffiness. |
 tshdow 2009-04-22 . chapter 1that was well worth the read. Thanks. |
 Natvv 2009-04-21 . chapter 1Aw Charah-y goodness.
That ruled ;D |
 clayfish32 2009-04-21 . chapter 1One of the many things I love about "Christian" songs are that they can often be used as love songs...because they ARE.
Nice use of the song, I don't know that I've listened to much Third Day since Conspiracy No. 5, but this song looks worth checking out.
"You showed me that I was, to borrow a phrase, meant to live for so much more.”" (Switchfoot ref?) Nice.
Seriously, this was well written and just the thing that I needed to get me through the week. What with the possibility of show cancellation and all--I needed some happy in my life. Thank you. |
 songandsilence 2009-04-21 . chapter 1LKDNMFPIAUHFN;OEMDOAUHFAIPUNGPFMAIUG'';.DVJAIPNHPOFYGWEF
This was awesome and I loved it (if you couldn't tell from my keysmash above lol). :D |
 jollpw 2009-04-21 . chapter 1Thanks,
I think all of us Charah fans were hoping for a scene something like this last night when they met by the fountain to attend the rehearsal dinner. I hope they don't have to go backwards in the story but we shall see. I especially like how you wrote Sarah. She quietly and awkwardly communicated her feelings which is so in character with her on the show. Well done. I like the believable plot line of her having a few days before being reassigned in deep cover. I think this is how it would likely play out... But I also like how they didn't let this ruin there evening or try to solve it right there. Some fanfics go around and around over Sarah quitting her job. I like that you did not force that issue here. Bring on more Charah in the finale! |
 nattylovesjordy 2009-04-21 . chapter 1Very nice.
I will now not listen to Third Day the same! |
 ulstergirl 2009-04-21 . chapter 1the story was so great! i love all the details about the car. and the ending was killer. can't wait for next week's episode. |
 bohoxlove 2009-04-21 . chapter 1so cute!
i like it a lot!
haha, devon makes everything so perverted.
awesome! |
 eckesg1 2009-04-21 . chapter 1Cut out the Buy More Segments and put this in!
It's perfect. |
 zagsaddict 2009-04-21 . chapter 1Great continuation of last night's episode. |