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Reviews for: In His Eyes
prophet144
2009-06-20 . chapter 1
I like the premise that you have, especially about calling in Tommy's friends, but you should rethink the first part of the story. If I hadn't scrolled to the bottom, I would have abandoned it right at the beginning. That's probably why you haven't gotten a lot of reviews, but might have a lot of hits.

Also, I was wondering if you were aware that there was an older story on this site, also in the Power Rangers category, that is titled "In His Eyes". That one is being written by Be A Warrior Casseau. It's a slash fic, so if you don't want people mistaking your story for that one, you might want to consider changing the name of your story.

Truthfully, the title doesn't fit. Only the song that you start the story with fits the title. It seems more like you're trying to set the stage for something later on, which might make a good title: Setting the Stage for the Future. Just a thought.
Jeremy Shane
2009-04-21 . chapter 1
good story
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