I really liked the way you portrayed their relationship here - sweet and close but still kind of messed up. I also liked all the little descriptive touches and the way little incidents stuck in their minds.

I guess this was an AU? I liked the combination of hope and not-hope that was going on here as well.

Sorry if the review is a bit disjointed - I'm sleepy!

This just seemed to slide straight into the scummy run down streets of Neo Tokyo. As if it was a left out chapter, or a brief interlude. It was great, loved it.

I adore how you write, it's simple and descriptive, and you can picture so much from it. Plus I'm happy to see the two being nice to each other. Very good. I'll need to finish reading this when I get home today.

Finally, a really good T/K fic in a long time! This was very sweet without being too mushy, and still showed the grittiness of Neo Tokyo without going overboard. Not only were the characters IC, but I'm happy to see them actually enjoying each other's company for a change. Keep up the good work! :)