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Reviews for: Flying too Close to the Sun
excessivelyperky
2009-05-19 . chapter 1
No wonder Severus was willing to let Voldemort teach him how to fly. The decree against Underage Magic is mainly wand focused, since I very much doubt there are enough Aurors to investigate the accidental kind--but Severus is right about the Ministry, and Lily is wrong. And she's beginning to realize, if only a little bit, that if they both do wrong her friend will be punished, and not her.

I like your Lily a lot better than the one in canon.
Rachel Indeed
2009-04-22 . chapter 1
Thanks so much, I really enjoyed this. I thought their conversation was intelligent and interesting. And I liked the way they comforted each other through arguing and distracting each other -- it seems very them :)
Mother of Tears
2009-04-21 . chapter 1
Interesting having Lily being the one to teach Sev to fly, and having it labeled dark makes it even more interesting.
MajorJune
2009-04-21 . chapter 1
Ah, yes, think happy thoughts just like Peter Pan, exactly! LOL

Great story!
8thweasleykid
2009-04-21 . chapter 1
Poor Sev. so misunderstood, so confused. Good one-shot!
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