A great story. Very good.

The was really sweet of Jackie..why Uncle have to go...the poor old dude...i thought he was pretty cool...aw...God bless dude!

Wow, that's really sad. Why did you kill Uncle though? Still good.

That is so cool so far I mean Jackie supriesed by seeing Viper well I would be too if she was at my door well anyways it is cool so far so write more please

Good.

That's really sad. I like Uncle. Is this a songfic? You didn't say for sure.

I cryed when I was done reading *crys* its so sad!

P.S. Please post more!

-...err...why doesn't he just use the rat talisman [I think?] to heal Uncle?
It's the Horse Talisman, and once a person is dead, (like uncle) they cannot be healed, they need to be revived.

Wonderful fic!

you are to serious, but its still cool.

Awwwww...that story was so sad(

That was a sweet fic *sniffle* and I liked the Backstreet Boy's song you put in there!

*sniff*sniff* Poor Uncle! This is so sad. The song lines help the story along, good idea. The only part that i dont like, is how Hak gets arrested: i think if they COULD arrest any of the Dark Hand, they would have done it by now just a thought.

Very good! The sequeal (however you spell that :p) is going good too, so far! _

...err...why doesn't he just use the rat talisman [I think?] to heal Uncle?

I don't know why. I was confused by that, too. The only way I got into the Jackie Chan section was through the uploading process. I am thinking of a sequel, but haven't gotten inspired yet. Don't expect a sequel soon. Anyway, thanks for the compliments! _ If anyone gets an idea for a sequel to this, please e-mail me at .