How cute but was it or was it NOT a dream? You never really answered that question.

Okay, now it sounds like you've thrown Yami Bakura's personality into your personality-screwed yami.

If you're anything like how you portray yourself in this duel, in real life, then I envy your girlfriend. She's lucky, I hope she appreciates that.

Of course he laughed evilly. He's a pyschotic nutcase who (for once) doesn't want to rule/destroy the world. I don't get why the villians always want to destroy the world because then they'd be killing themselves as well.

I'm kind of wondering what Yami James's problem is and I'm sorry that I'm not really reading into the duel that much but give me a break, it's 20 chapters long.

Dang this duel is long. I don't know how you survived.

Heh, I noticed that your pen name is Zapto. It seems like Yami James is a combo of the personality of Yami Marik and Dartz.

*tilts head* And I thought it was insane having a duel take up three chapters but you've done a 20-chapter duel-fic with 3 OCs. Although the chapters that I did were a lot longer than yours, say about 6 thousand-7 thousand words long.

Um, why the heck is there even a darker side?

So who's the mystery guy? don't tell me.

"The mysterious villain said evilly"... Well duh, what he said was said evilly. That was a humorous touch though.

wait a minute
whats the parting gift that yami left james and kristiann?

yay! this kristiann character finally got minor character development...however slight...and however much it made her still look like an idiot

im just curious as to how yami james can claim over and over that everyone had a dark side and yet somehow this kristiann character has somehow managed to be a good influence and light, and completely lacking in a dark side, seems kinda right now that this kristiann is just some extremely idolized and unrealistic character, who either you keep her as an idolized character, like lucy in tale of two cities, or she could stand to develop as a character