|Reviews for Jasper's Golden Moon|
| Kilt Girl 8/9/09 . chapter 2
Really good chapter! Jasper's a little naughtier in this story that I had originally thought, but I don't mind it, lol. I can't wait to see what Jasper's view of Chapter 37 will be! :)
| linnfromia 7/26/09 . chapter 1
I enjoyed Golden Moon a lot and am really glad to get Jasper's perspective! I especially like your opening paragraphs where he's musing on her and her scent. Please, please continue!
| AshleyLovesYou 7/26/09 . chapter 2
Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ This story is amazing! I love it so much! Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ
Peace cuz I'm outtie
| oldsoul1964 7/23/09 . chapter 2
I like hearing Jaspers POV
| TwilightLurker 7/22/09 . chapter 2
Thanks for updating! This was terrific. Of course, I'm looking forward (eagerly but patiently!) to chaps 37, 50 and 54. Glad to hear you've been enjoying your summer!
| Arisa E Blake 7/22/09 . chapter 1
Wow, just simply wow, it's amazing! Thank you for posting it! X:Arisa
| VainVamp 7/22/09 . chapter 2
You are absolutely awesome! I loved both of your chaps and i cant wait for more!
| pattign 7/21/09 . chapter 2
I saw the update alert in my inbox and felt like I'd just opened the Wonka Bar with the Golden Ticket.
yay! Love J's PoV in while he's changing. Can't wait for 37-40-54
| ffyreflyy 7/20/09 . chapter 2
I had to reread part 1, it'd been so long...
"her sidelong examination of me actually made her shiver." heh. do i need to say it?
I kind of feel like I'm on an easter egg hunt - reading through the story waiting for specific references to pop up, and if I don't tag them, I lose points... Maybe just because I know the story?
"The immense fury I felt at the though of another man, or even a boy like Jacob Black, being anywhere near my Bella, was astounding. " I prefer 'deliciously possessive.' Not really sure what, if anything, that means about *me,* but hey...
"I knew in the end she would appreciate honesty more." Nice choice of dramatic irony.
"That was such a Bella response." That was such a great sentence.
"I couldn’t believe she was actually suggesting that I let Laurent go. Did she think this was a fucking game?"
So, is it safe to say then, in retrospect, that Alice 'warned' Jasper about Laurent not as much to keep him (J) safe as to ensure that he would kill Laurent, thereby removing Laurent from the final scene in the Cullens' yard? (as in, less to save Jasper, more to kill Bella) Because I'm pretty sure Alice knows Jasper can hold his own, especially in a one-on-one situation.
"I trust you completely.” Ah, the magic words that pretty much guarantee we get our way... ;) Better living through guilt.
"that damned permanent reminder of James, the one I had been too fucking late to prevent." I like the Phoenix stuff. I like that he totally remembers it like she was that important then. That it was *his* faltering... (yeah, I get it, the man is in love. I still like the way it came out.)
And yeah, the very best parts were not the new parts, but I do like the chapter, overall.
But now I have a mere 4.5 hours to sleep. So enjoy your mutterings.
| BeCullen 7/20/09 . chapter 2
I just love Jasper. I can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks for updating.
| jess007 7/20/09 . chapter 2
keep up the writing and being superwoman.
(i do not know how you do it but gee i wish i could.)
| vivid.daydreamer 7/19/09 . chapter 2
Not your best work my ass, that was great! :)
Can't wait for the rest
| plumerialost 7/19/09 . chapter 2
I like hearing from Jasper. :) It makes me happy. Thanks for writing part 2, can't wait for the other 3 chapters. I'm glad you're enjoying your summer vacation. I hope it's everything you want it to be. Congrats on the noms! Good luck!
| Seira asami 7/19/09 . chapter 2
It's interesting to read from Jasper POV. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Ps. Glad u r back .
| lovedwardalways 7/19/09 . chapter 2
Great chapter love foul mouthed jasper he is a horny little bugger huh.