 Arika-of-the-Demons 2009-11-01 . chapter 5amazing! please update soon! |
 TheMostPatheticNameEver 2009-10-27 . chapter 5It's great. The concept, the characters, the writing style, the plot. Everything.
I'd like to know more about what happened later, though. Sure, it's a good ending, but I'M CRAVING FOR MORE!
I'm glad I found it ^^ |
 shyd1 2009-10-01 . chapter 5 Ah the ending!!
What an amazing story.
Love the romance, love the relationships.
Mostly I love how real Roxas is, and how quickly you made his connection to Axel feel MEANT TO BE without seeming jilted or fake -even with a cliche memory loss plot!
Great read!! |
 GingerMOnster 2009-09-13 . chapter 5 This was cute, thanks! |
 blahgirl13 2009-09-05 . chapter 5OMG! THAT WAS SO COOL!
andnu! why ou not come back?! you are amazing! nd what about those of us who dun have LiveJournal??
what then??
we shall suffer, thats what!
DX |
 lamatikah 2009-08-26 . chapter 5:D I'm not thanking God it's over. Because it was lovely!
I want to read more!
It's got a nice sort of... atmosphere and setting.
I liked it a /lot/ X3
reimei xx |
 BanpaiaYoru 2009-08-24 . chapter 5OMG THAT IS AMAZING! <3 you ARE AMAZING |
 animebecca 2009-08-24 . chapter 5I -love- this story. The plot, the refreshing way you worked in Organization XI, the relationships and the seamless way you managed to switch between the past and the present. Everything about this is perfect. Five stars. |
 fantasies4eva 2009-08-21 . chapter 5love your writing style and how each bit of the story is revealed step by step. awesome work :P |
 animearlinefreak 2009-08-21 . chapter 5aww they knew each other when they were young. Looking forward to the next chapter! |
 sweetLies 2009-08-20 . chapter 5The last scene was a bit of a cliche but it's all good since it was how this story came to be. >< Axel is so sweet in this story! |
 Wingz 2009-08-17 . chapter 1Ah, it seems I've missed the 127th mark. Oh well, I'll survive. Probably. :L
I really loved this chapter. It was so sweet and Roxas was really awesome here. I loved the little twist at the end and the fact that Roxas sort-of remembered at the end. It made me very happy and seemed like the best ending for this story, even if it's slightly cliche ;)
I'm kinda sad to hear that you might be fleeing to LJ, but I'll just have to stalk you there instead ;) I really love reading your stuff, it always makes me laugh and the plots are really unique. Your writing style is also stunning.
Happy Writing and good luck over at LJ!
~Lori |
 TheaBlackthorn 2009-08-17 . chapter 5wow that was a great chappie. I'm sad to here you won't be posting on anymore but I shall follow you on LJ if that's okay.
For the comp:
:) |
 waffies 2009-08-16 . chapter 2 oh dear. it seems that i've missed it. i tried oh so hard to get that notebook. but i had to leave today, and wasn't on to get it. how troubling. i've been checking obsessively. D;
but that's okay. i really do love this story. it was a good end, in my opinion. sad that you won't post any more on this site, but i'm watching your LJ, so it's all good.
just incase something weird happened with the emails or something, i'll leave mine...
missywong92 at msn dot com |
 immacookie 2009-08-16 . chapter 3I don't know if you meant 127th reviewer that also leaves their email, or 127th person to leave their email, but I'm going to hope it's the former and that the last four or so haven't done so..
:D |