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evilredmenace
2009-12-04 . chapter 1
This was a lot of fun. I'm a fan of sexy results, and the ensuing consequences of them. Well done!
Tezuka's girl
2009-10-14 . chapter 1
I give this story a pass. and it has converted me true and true. i have always been a Wesker/Claire fan. don't ask why i guess because in with the recent upgrades in graphic Wesker got hott. but so has Leon and that is why he was always my fave character. any ways i'm definitely going to be reading more and more Claire and Leon fics and heck mabey i'll right my own.

but for a teen rated fic there was some graphic sex it seemed to me in the beginning. also the story tended to drag as parts. like claire's whole blow up and some parts before.

but all and all i liked it.
.Strawberry.kitkat.
2009-08-19 . chapter 1
I'll have to say this is my favorite story of all. This is one of the best stories I've read here; it's funny and fun to read, and still holds the essence of all the characters. Keep up the good work.
XOXO
~Kitsa
Elivanna
2009-07-30 . chapter 1
Loved it! I enjoy the way you write the character's interactions and personalities. I gotta say that you've got me addicted to the Leon/Claire pairing...have been reading your stories all day, but that's not a bad thing. ^_^ Can't wait to see more stories.
Caracal222
2009-07-14 . chapter 1
Oh Firestar... Your RE stories never cease to amaze me. ^^

This one's a great read!
MarcusKrueger46
2009-06-13 . chapter 1
It kind of bothers me that all reviewers on this site ever seem to do is gush about a story or flame it, and if you offer constructive criticism, usually the author takes it as a personal attack. I hope you're not in that category (you don't strike me as the type of lass that would), but either way here's my HONEST opinion: I liked the story, but something kept bugging me like a monkey gnawing on the back of my neck: the dialogue. Especially early on during the pool game. Some of the things the characters said just didn't fit. "We'll be as gentle as lambs" was one of the worst lines, so was "you're a scorpion woman". I doubt a brooding, badass government agent like Leon Kennedy would crack out that "lambs" simile in a casual bar game, and the "scorpion woman" line seemed like Chris was trying way too hard to be a playful, sarcastic twenty-something instead of just BEING a playful, sarcastic twenty-something. The dialogue not only seemed unrealistic, it lacked characterization. Either one of those could have worked for Claire, say, depending on the context and situation. They just aren't things that guys, let alone MANLY MEN! like Leon Kennedy and Chris Redfield would say. So dialogue, I'd say, is something you really need to work on. Other than that, your style was solid. You chose some really effective keystone details and the non-dialogue areas flowed like a river filled with Penzoil (that's a good thing), and like I said before, I loved the story itself, despite its faults.
ClairexLeon
2009-06-08 . chapter 1
I so love this story the best and I also love the bar scene that one was my fave.
Keep on writing more even if they are just one-shots.
One-shots about Claire and Leon goes a long way with a Cleon fan.
Hey Dhee
2009-05-15 . chapter 1
OH FUCKIN DAMN!! OH shit!! Oh GOD! I Almost hit my head against the glass door twice.. coz I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! (jumping through the window, kill the neighboor's dog)

I don't know what to say... it's sweet.. and I felt sad for Chris.. that he's giving her lil sista away.. T.T oohh.. but still it's sweet.. the words, the moments, and the photos of course.. just made me melted.. It's beautiful! XD I love u.. hahaha.. -slapped-

just keep writing dear..
Hanae Michiko
2009-05-11 . chapter 1
Oh man, did I ever enjoy this. It had me laughing out loud most of the time (I'm particularly fond of Chris' line to Jill, "And incidentally, I can remember back to six days ago...", haha), but all the relationships and interactions were very touching. I loved Claire and Chris' brother-sister relationship (it's one of my favorite things to see people explore in stories, especially since I have an older brother, who is incidentally the reason I'm a Resident Evil fan ^^), but Chris and Jill's relationship was made of win - they were so funny, and yet still sweet. And of course, the reason we're all here, the Claire and Leon, which pretty much had me in a melty puddle for the duration of the fic. :D The way you interweave little details about the characters, tidbits of background information and anecdotes, is so perfectly executed. They fit seamlessly within the fabric of the main plot and make the story that much more compelling and interesting and fun to read. Thank you for writing and sharing such entertaining stories!
Pily-chan
2009-05-01 . chapter 1
HELLO, I ONLY TELL YOU THAT I LOVED YOUR HISTORY A LOT. I WONDER IF YOU WOULD GIVE ME YOUR AUTHORIZATION TO PUBLISH IT IN THE SECTION OF SPANISH, OBVIOUSLY, PRESENTING IT AS YOUR CREATION.
THE TRANSLATION THIS ALMOST FINISHED ONE. PLEASE, GIVE ME AN ANSWER.
ATTN.: PILY-CHAN
PS. BY THE WAY, SORRY, BUT, I'M TERRIBLE WRITING IN ENGLISH, JEJEJE!
guffen
2009-04-26 . chapter 1
Amazing story, hope to see more of them.
Maatlockk
2009-04-22 . chapter 1
I've been trying to revie this last night but my IE crashed on me. So the fact that I waited till my PC is stable to review this should mean something, I hope. :D

Your fics are very well written, and I'm definitely taking pointers from your style of writing from now on.
Sythlia
2009-04-22 . chapter 1
Aw. Even my stony little heart was moved by this nice tale of love, acceptance and making Chris pay up for losing the bet. :D I'm not too big of a Leon fan, but he's really given some justice here! I wouldn't mind seeing this Leon more often. :)
Lina
2009-04-22 . chapter 1
I absolutely loved it. It was so well written, and I love Leon and Claire.
I hope to see more of your work on the future.
Hobohunter
2009-04-22 . chapter 1
Love it! You write Leon and Claire perfectly, you do such a great job! :)
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