I've really enjoyed the story so far and am about half way through. I'm very surprised that more people haven't reviewed this... one suggestion I'll give is that it might be a better if it was cut into chapters, heh, if your anything like me... going to read a story and finding the whole thing sitting in front of you, is a bit much, plus I'll be too tempted to skip to the end _

Very well put together. Everything blended nicely.

This is a great story-why didn't anyone else review? Shame on them. Please write a sequel to this, it's a great piece of writing.

This was a great story. I'm surprised more people didn't review (shame on those who read and didn't). I hope you plan a sequel, although it would probably be hard considering she threw her henshin away. Alright, keep up the great writing.

I like It was good will there be a sequal?