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Reviews for: My Life as a Teenage Ranma
For Spite
2009-08-19 . chapter 1
I agree, Ranma as an insert character is bad for the person stuck as him. Not as bad as finding yourself an EVA pilot, but bad.
And Pantyhose Tarou has had me wondering about how dumb it might be to just jump into Jusenkyo springs for a while.
If this remains well written, I look forward to seeing how else you diverge from canon events.
Daniel14541
2009-05-29 . chapter 1
Oh please keep on updating!
Adeptis
2009-05-11 . chapter 1
Good story.
Essex
2009-05-06 . chapter 1
Nice new story. I'm always glad to see when you've written something, because I've never seen you write anything that wasn't great.
dogbertcarroll
2009-04-23 . chapter 1
This has some promise. I'd suggest spring of drowned twins or possibly the one Rouge used if the curses mix. Might as well have a useful curse.
michael68
2009-04-22 . chapter 1
Good start!

I've always wanted to see a fic where Soun gets tricked into knocking out Shampoo, giving the Tendoes a new StepMother.


Possible idea:
Mix the dragon whisker, a packet of instant girl, and Ranma's blood together to turn your girl form into a dragon girl similar to Prince Herb, granting increased ki reserves, an affinity to fire, and pink highlights in her red hair. Ranma may have disliked free power ups, but you're not Ranma.
Deepdream
2009-04-22 . chapter 1
Not too shabby for a first chapter.^^
I like your style - and I believe you that it is quite as hassle to write from first-person view. It doesn't matter to me if you continue this story in first oder third person as long as you continue it.
1. I like your SI-character.
2. Ryogas cursed but not to be a piglet.

Hopefully, you are going to explore different paths of SI with this story. Including new ideas, new relationships between the characters and so on.^^

Looking really forward to your next chapter,

Deepdream
Scourgeofthegalaxy
2009-04-22 . chapter 1
This is really good so far. I look forward to seeing where you'll take it.
Rogue7
2009-04-22 . chapter 1
I don't read many self inserts, but I think I might have to keep an eye on this one, it's interesting so far :)

"Now what am I going to do?" push Genma in after Ryoga gets out of the Nyanniicuan ?
wolf-in-hell
2009-04-22 . chapter 1
Neat, I havnt see na self insert stry with a start this good in a long time. I do hope to see more soon.
tatewaki2000
2009-04-22 . chapter 1
:D

Nice! I love self inserts. And I love how well this fic is written.

Very interesting, and I hope to read some more. ^^

Nicely done.
Dumbledork
2009-04-22 . chapter 1
This story isn't bad, honestly. But I'm not a big fan of self inserts. I'd prefer to read more chapters of your other fics, especially 'Ai no senshi Wild Honey'.

This story could be entertaining, though.
Nairojam
2009-04-22 . chapter 1
I believe my reaction is "Yay, a New Tangent fic! He's Alive!" Yup, that about sums it up. Otherwise, interesting start, not sure I have seen any recent SI that start at this point in ranma's history, so be interesting to see where this goes.
Baughn
2009-04-22 . chapter 1
Huh. Well, at least fox-girl is better than fox, and hopefully it still turns off with hot water.

You'd think people would remember Tarou, though. For that matter, you *did* remember Tarou when you wrote this, so why didn't the self-insert..?
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