oh my gosh.

this story is insane.

in a good way. its so funny and over the top but it works with your writing style. ) the only thing i have to pick on is sometimes your grammar is messy. apart from that, keep going!

OMG, I love the title of this chapter.

This was so super duper cute. :)

Naruto's such a babe. :P

I hope you update soon.

As in, TOMORROW.

PLEASE? :D

You know...

Barney has nothing to do with this...-_-"

I'm going to sound very cruel here... but I swear there was a time when your stories didn't seem to ramble and that they *didn't* seem to be written by an eight year old.

Even if I were to consider that English might not be your first language I still can't help but cringe at some of your... for lack of better word "nicknames" in this story.

Also, you are very Out of Character with these.

My only real suggestion would probably be to a)re-read everything that you write, and b)to get yourself a Beta-reader.

Sorry for the tough love :

This story is so all over the place that it gave me a headache.

I LOVE IT.

ahaha...m liking what i've read so far...this is one of those stories...very weirdly amusing :D

OHMYGOSH, I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THE Kakashi/Sakura moment. IT'S THE LEE/GAI PERVERTED WAY. xD

i absolutely LOVE you.

Ahaha, wow. I almost feel sorry for Sasuke. I'm pretty sure Sakura will be freaking out once she goes back to normal. How embarressing. (x

Your writing is pretty undescribable...well I suppose that is a lie, since "Awesome", "Great", and "OHMYYFRIGGENGOD!" applied to this, but in bigger words...it's kinda hard, lol. Definitely well-written and hilarious. Pratically everyone put you as one of their Favorite Authors, hundreds of reviews for every story, every story is great, and I'm sure at least one person has died from laughing too much after reading your stories. (;

I love the story. Update soon please :D

Omg! Thats funny as hell. Lmao! U gotta continue! (or is it left for our imagnation? 0.o) kwa! Im adding this. Laters.

lol. this story is awesome! i can't stop laughing xD

i seriously can't wait to read the next chapter and what sasuke is going to do to save sakura from selling her virginity. update soon!

:D

I always find your work very entertaining.

Thanks!

I LOVE this story...update soon...

AJH

haha

i guess it is pretty sick when sakura starts blabbing nonsense but the story is very funny... quite entertaining on my part haha

pls update

lemon popsicles? im pretty sure the word wasnt coincidence...hehe foreshadowing of *something* to come? Lawl

love it :)