omg that was so cute!
plz write some more james nd laura.
you did a rlly good job.

LOL! He can stand all the monsters and blood, but not a training bra!? 2 GOOD!

This is cute. Except I don't think James makes a very good father, if Laura can boss him around that easily ;)

No major problems with this. Just minor things I can't really put my thumb on exactly, and don't overall detract from the story itself.

:D HAHA FUNNY!! XDXD

Now, don't go on calling James a failure. He might grab a pillow!

Awesome! It was cute and very amusing. Loved the description as always!

But really...if I had to take care of a girl like Laura, I'm sure I would punch her at the first 'fartface'.

They deserve each other.

Great job again. Me loves it ;D

-Jeani xx