This should boost Chayton's look at the emotions of living things.

dawwz, so cute

Nice one shot and the evolution thing was a good ideah.

Very nice story. Integrating the happiness from the games and true friends confessing their love for one another is amazing. Good work man.

awwwww.

i wish i could write like you could , i will get there one day. it is a shame you left fanfiction.

BUT if you are still here then prove me wrong and send me a reply. you left your light in the darkness story unfinished, that is my favorite story on this entire site. i don't like unfinished stories, please finish it.

you should wright another chapter

Love the story and i hope it's continued! I would definitely read it!

You gonna continue?

I wish I could write like that.

It's a great story and I will read any continuation of it.

Could you make an adventure from when they first met each other?

I loved it?

Aw, this was adorable. It makes me wish I had these two as my Pokemon in this game. XD I love how they both managed to evolve during it.

This one-shot is so cute! I could see it making a really good short story, but thats totally up to you. I'd read it fo sho!

Awsome! This really rocks! Keep on writing it, I'd love to read more.

Really good oneshot. I am so used to chaptered fictions though, that I want to ask for a sequel. It is your story though and I have no right to ask for it. It was really well done and a good romance to be sure. I can only hope that any other oneshots that you make can be as good as this one, if not better. I give a 9 out of 10. Still, sorry, because I would like a longer version to get closure on it, if not a sequal. It is just the stories that I am used to reading.

OMFG! THIS IS THE BEST POKÉMON FAN FIC I'VE READTHROUGHOUT MY ENTIRE LIFE!

KEEP WRITING! KEEP WRITING! PLEASE! I really want to read MORE of this wonderful piece of art!