I really enjoy this story. It had a great plot line and i love how you added Rome into it. I can't wait to see the reaction of everyone when they find out about Brian being Letty's son.

I think the story is actually pretty good so far. it would be prety cool if the crew actually found out brians actual age and about his childhood up to this point but that's just my opinion.

Seriously? MORE MORE MORE MORE :P

Man after reading your fantastic four story I went to your profile to see if you had written anything else...besides peoples profiles are interesting you know? I like yours..fun to read

Oh! I got off track!
To the story...this was great and you did a perfect job in taking something unbelievable in most circumstances and making it fell and seem pretty darn real. Man I can't wait till they find that they are related and I can't wait till you update. Man you rock...now you've made my week!

Hey this was good. Curious in wondering if they find out about him being their son and how that would come about since your also follwoing losely the movie story line. Other than that you are doing really good.

Serenity

I have been reading this story since you first started writing it and i LOVE it! I hope you continue and I am really glad that you have started putting in a little paternal dom and I really hope you update soon!

Like it but I hoe that he doesn't mess around with Mia as she is his aunt, and i can't wait for the news to come out like Dom has Jesse run him and he finds something else about Letty giving birth around the same time he was born, at the same hospital but his record saying that his mother died in childbirth or something.

i love this. favourite fast and furious fic!

please please please update really soon .

i cant wait t see how everyone finds out.

thanks

i cant wait for more! best story ever.

update real soon

I am hooked. Please keep writing. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

I defiantly liked this update. I can't wait to read more. Oh...when do you think you'll have them find out that Brian is only a teenager as well as related to them? Well...anyways...can't wait to see when that happens.

Great chapter!

I LIKE IT BROWNIE.
I THINK IT WAS A VERY GOOD CHAPTER AND THE PART OF BRIAN THROW UP IT WAS VERY REALISTIC BECAUSE IF HE NEVER DRANK BEER, THE FIRST TIME IS YUCK.
I LIKE HOW MIA TAKE CARE OF HIM
YOU DID A GREAT JOB WRITTING THIS ONE.
PLEASE KEEP THE GOOD STUFF COMING.
LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT ONE.

P.S.: YES 4 DAYS WITHOUT INTERNET COULD MAKE YOU CRAZY

i really liked it :)
glad you had the time to update again hahaha, even though you didn't really have any internet for a while hahaha just hope you can update fast again :D

i kinda hope that Dom and Letty will figure it out sooner than the do in the movie that he's a sort-of-kind-of cop (in this) haha. And that he's pretty much their son and only sixteen. That would be so cool :D


Looking forward to next time!

~sam

Where is Brian's mother reaction to his presence.If Dom is having the parental feelings shouldn't it stand to reason so would Letty...his name should at least have her thinking back and pulling out the baby photo ofhim.