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melioko
2009-11-23 . chapter 4
It was so sweet...and so sad!
I really like the way in which you write Itachi. He has a human side that makes him secretly long for love and comfort.
It's also amusing to see that even in a perfect world he can't lose his pride.XD
The idea of the agreement with Naruto(...the sixth Hokage...)gives reliability to the illusion.
The paring is my favourite!
Can't wait for another ItaHana story!!
hypheniated
2009-11-19 . chapter 3
picky picky Itachi about interaction. :P

that would be scary, being attacked by something you love to do/work around.

psh, Itachi's so normal.

i like the reference-ness to the manga bit there. :D

i love Ino's connections :D

hey, i author-alerted you a while back, so i get everything you update :)
Cheese Maiden
2009-11-15 . chapter 3
Very funny, and I can see why they would have those fears. I think it would be even more scarier for Itachi if it was in front of fangirls.
melioko
2009-11-15 . chapter 3
It was really amusing!!
I could almost see Itachi straight back, wiping his lips with the napkin and staring at Hana in aristocratic disbelief!!
Why don't you write a story about Hana's first dinner with Itachi's parents(or Itachi's first dinner with Hana's family)?
Write more, please!
stitch62603
2009-11-14 . chapter 3
XXD ROFL! That was good! I was actually expecting it to be your usual tragic drama but this was great!^^
XxOneAndOnlyxX
2009-09-10 . chapter 2
this was quite good...it was a good depressing if you ask me...i liked it!
stitch62603
2009-08-25 . chapter 2
Wow...nice.
I love the ending^^
hypheniated
2009-08-11 . chapter 2
it is kinda depressing...why give Hana so much grief?

Aw, well, I bet Shiba would be adorable and look like her father.
Dictionary Ink
2009-08-11 . chapter 2
The best thing since sliced bread? I'm flattered.

YEAH HANA! KICK HIS BUTT! (Even though I know that they should be together, and will therefore give in and LOVE HIM AS IS PROPER!)

Wow, it's like a SasuSaku cliche, only about EIGHT TRILLION TIMES BETTER. GO HANA!

Omigod... Sakura... I love you. GO SAKURA!! GO, GO SAKURA! BEAT HIS HEAD IN!

I fucking love you, too. WHY ARE YOU LEAVING ME?! NO! YOU MUST NOT LEAVE MEH!
hypheniated
2009-07-01 . chapter 1
you dedicated to me, and I didn't even check this out yet -.-

Aww, kittens!

The kids are so adorable!

o.0 Naruto should learn to shut the door when he's having smex!

hahahah, Itachi squeaked! -dies laughing-
Cheese Maiden
2009-05-30 . chapter 1
This is my favorite couple, and it is nice to read a story where they can be a happy normal family. I would love to see how Itachi would be when his daughters start dating.
NeverGoodbyeRoxas
2009-05-21 . chapter 1
What a cute, picturesque portrait of a domestic Hana and Itachi. There aren't enough of these around (and the fics that are out there rarely take a look at the possibility of their family life together).
stitch62603
2009-05-12 . chapter 1
Aww thanks for the dedi^^


It was cute. Love little Shiba. You do write the best family fluff XD
laurelsblue
2009-04-23 . chapter 1
Aw... ItaHana family fluff.
Just a few things though. Itachi calls Shiba 'Shibi' a couple of times during the car journey. Is that a typo, a nickname or Itachi having trouble telling the difference between his daughter and Shino's dad?
Also when Hana says everything is his fault, there's a question mark instead of an exclaimation one.
Dictionary Ink
2009-04-23 . chapter 1
I gots a dedication... Life is love is laughter.

Omigod, you DIDN'T. XD The pets! BAHAHAHAHAHA, The poor goldfish...

Naughty, naughty Itachi...

You stole me line! Angry weasel.. XD And Sui-kun is right. Sasuke DOES had a stick up his ass. Hell, it's coming out of his throat!

Oh dear... Sakura... not cooking... You theif! Only Kakashi can make food come alive, as far as I'm cocerned. Sakura knows she can't cook, so she doesn't even try. X3 Sasu-chan can cook, and since he's totally whipped... XD

What kind of friend are you, huh? Don't kick me, kick Sasu-chan!
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