 melioko 2009-11-23 . chapter 4It was so sweet...and so sad!
I really like the way in which you write Itachi. He has a human side that makes him secretly long for love and comfort.
It's also amusing to see that even in a perfect world he can't lose his pride.XD
The idea of the agreement with Naruto(...the sixth Hokage...)gives reliability to the illusion.
The paring is my favourite!
Can't wait for another ItaHana story!! |
 hypheniated 2009-11-19 . chapter 3picky picky Itachi about interaction. :P
that would be scary, being attacked by something you love to do/work around.
psh, Itachi's so normal.
i like the reference-ness to the manga bit there. :D
i love Ino's connections :D
hey, i author-alerted you a while back, so i get everything you update :) |
 Cheese Maiden 2009-11-15 . chapter 3Very funny, and I can see why they would have those fears. I think it would be even more scarier for Itachi if it was in front of fangirls. |
 melioko 2009-11-15 . chapter 3It was really amusing!!
I could almost see Itachi straight back, wiping his lips with the napkin and staring at Hana in aristocratic disbelief!!
Why don't you write a story about Hana's first dinner with Itachi's parents(or Itachi's first dinner with Hana's family)?
Write more, please! |
 stitch62603 2009-11-14 . chapter 3XXD ROFL! That was good! I was actually expecting it to be your usual tragic drama but this was great!^^ |
 XxOneAndOnlyxX 2009-09-10 . chapter 2this was quite good...it was a good depressing if you ask me...i liked it! |
 stitch62603 2009-08-25 . chapter 2Wow...nice.
I love the ending^^ |
 hypheniated 2009-08-11 . chapter 2it is kinda depressing...why give Hana so much grief?
Aw, well, I bet Shiba would be adorable and look like her father. |
 Dictionary Ink 2009-08-11 . chapter 2The best thing since sliced bread? I'm flattered.
YEAH HANA! KICK HIS BUTT! (Even though I know that they should be together, and will therefore give in and LOVE HIM AS IS PROPER!)
Wow, it's like a SasuSaku cliche, only about EIGHT TRILLION TIMES BETTER. GO HANA!
Omigod... Sakura... I love you. GO SAKURA!! GO, GO SAKURA! BEAT HIS HEAD IN!
I fucking love you, too. WHY ARE YOU LEAVING ME?! NO! YOU MUST NOT LEAVE MEH! |
 hypheniated 2009-07-01 . chapter 1you dedicated to me, and I didn't even check this out yet -.-
Aww, kittens!
The kids are so adorable!
o.0 Naruto should learn to shut the door when he's having smex!
hahahah, Itachi squeaked! -dies laughing- |
 Cheese Maiden 2009-05-30 . chapter 1This is my favorite couple, and it is nice to read a story where they can be a happy normal family. I would love to see how Itachi would be when his daughters start dating. |
 NeverGoodbyeRoxas 2009-05-21 . chapter 1What a cute, picturesque portrait of a domestic Hana and Itachi. There aren't enough of these around (and the fics that are out there rarely take a look at the possibility of their family life together). |
 stitch62603 2009-05-12 . chapter 1Aww thanks for the dedi^^
It was cute. Love little Shiba. You do write the best family fluff XD |
 laurelsblue 2009-04-23 . chapter 1Aw... ItaHana family fluff.
Just a few things though. Itachi calls Shiba 'Shibi' a couple of times during the car journey. Is that a typo, a nickname or Itachi having trouble telling the difference between his daughter and Shino's dad?
Also when Hana says everything is his fault, there's a question mark instead of an exclaimation one. |
 Dictionary Ink 2009-04-23 . chapter 1I gots a dedication... Life is love is laughter.
Omigod, you DIDN'T. XD The pets! BAHAHAHAHAHA, The poor goldfish...
Naughty, naughty Itachi...
You stole me line! Angry weasel.. XD And Sui-kun is right. Sasuke DOES had a stick up his ass. Hell, it's coming out of his throat!
Oh dear... Sakura... not cooking... You theif! Only Kakashi can make food come alive, as far as I'm cocerned. Sakura knows she can't cook, so she doesn't even try. X3 Sasu-chan can cook, and since he's totally whipped... XD
What kind of friend are you, huh? Don't kick me, kick Sasu-chan! |