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2009-11-16 . chapter 17
Great story. I hope you can continue to make chapters. And by the way, if you are still taking ideas, why not make a story that involves a marriage or a situation where they have kids? Just a suggestion if these ideas are appropriate by your standards. Keep up the good work.
FlareKnight
2009-09-22 . chapter 17
I have to say those admirers have guts to be going after Tsubaki while Black Star was around. Though it's probably crazy to do it at any rate since you never know when he might show up. Now sadly if I was there I might have ended up in said Tsubaki Fan Club. Sorry Black Star...

But at least I wouldn't be dumb enough to try and recruit Black Star in. God it's for the best for him to never know that group exists. Damn getting beaten to having a fan club by Tsubaki.

Oh Tsubaki bless her heart for being such a kind person. Generous enough to bring food she cooked herself to a group that lives to worship her.

I can understand how Black Star feels but it probably wasn't the best way to go about talking to her about it. Saying she wasn't meant to be under the spotlight for too long...

Still was interesting to watch an argument between them. Since it isn't something that happens that often. Normally Tsubaki would try to mend things right away, but there are times when won't bend. Part of being around Black Star so much had affected her.

Well I'll admit Tsubaki did hang onto something that she wasn't going to enjoy. Yet there isn't anything wrong with wanting the stage for a change. It's a mix of blame and I can't help leaning toward Black Star playing a bigger role in it. If he hadn't said it in a way that sounded like a challenge she wouldn't have dug her heels in.

Definitely wouldn't be a good update without Black Star declaring his identity, haha. But one heck of a way to add to the usual routine. Don't think it was hard for Tsubaki to play along though her heart probably was complaining about the stress.

A fun update that's for sure. Some real depth and crisis for the pair and ended nicely.
Milli Tora
2009-09-22 . chapter 17
Aw! I am so glad to have inspired you back into writing awesome Black Star/Tsuabki fluff! And, I have got to say, this one was hilarious. I mean, at first, it seems as if he's aggravated over all the suddenly attention Tsubaki has and I thought he was concerned. But to think that he was jealous of her having a FAN CLUB before him was something that, honestly, did not cross my mind. XD He's so silly, he really can't blame her for being so kind. Until she started doing it on purpose, which backfired, but they still got together in the end. This one is cute, so I now have a new favorite. You're taking requests? XD You just mad me one happy camper, now if only I can come up with something... Speaking of requests, what ever happened to the prequel of Acceptance? Are you still thinking of putting it on here or have you lost interest? If you haven't, know that I am here waiting patiently for it to come out!! =D Wonderful, awesome, spectacular, creative, mind-blowing... I am running out of words to describe your writings. XD Can't wait for the next one!!
Milli Tora
2009-09-22 . chapter 16
Wow. That was hot. xD And I also read the unedited version of this. You were not kidding when you told me you were a bit of a smut monster. I read 'em but only if they are good and are not only written for the sex. You, my friend, are awesome. Now, if people wrote like this, there wouldn't be a reason to hate smut. Poor Tsubaki, I'd be horrified too if the name of the man I care for got ripped from my lips in the aftermath of passionate loving-making, in dream version of course. Now why would you call this a 'nightmare'? There's is nothing bad about it at all. XD Well, this was certainly entertaining and I'd rate it 10 out of 10. Since there is only one more to go, I'll go ahead and read that one too. =D
Milli Tora
2009-09-22 . chapter 15
I'll admit, I was thrown off even with your generous warning. x3 Aha, for a moment I thought this was set in a future were their (meaning the SE gang) kids were involve. Anyway, it's interesting to see the Black Star/Tsubaki relationship from another view point because then we get to know what others think when a spontaneous devil means a soft-spoken angel come together. Black Star was definitely a little bold with that kiss, but it is Black Star, after all. XD You wrote a lemon? Oh, now I have got to finish reading!
Milli Tora
2009-09-22 . chapter 14
Number 34 was my absolute favorite because for some reason, I can imagine that scene happening in my head without difficulty. xD I feel bad for the neighbors now. I like these little one sentence drabbles; I find it hard to come up with a perfect theme to go with the situations that filter through my mind, so I praise you for accomplishing something so grand in my eyes. =D Each sentence drabble brought out the desired emotion (in me, in my opinion) and I thought some sweet and others just plain cute. I am telling you, I'm falling in love with your writing even more every time I read your stories! XD *hugs* I like this one too, so I'm calling another favorite! Now, let me read some more!!
Milli Tora
2009-09-22 . chapter 13
Oo Oh my God. Black Star has gone insane. *flees in terror* I didn't actually expect you to write about him going crazy, but this fits. This drabble makes me wonder: Would he really go berserk? I assume he would, should Tsubaki ever fall and not get back up. She really is the only constant in his life aside from the rest of the Soul Eater gang. x3 This one had my heart pounding in suspense and chills creeping up my spine. Insane!Black Star is a VERY scary thing to witness, but it is a good thing Tsubaki was there to save the day (and his sanity)! I like the song that you suggested, it really does fit the scene. XD *adds song to Ipod* I can possibly see this happening in the manga, should the creator thing about putting it in, and if he does, you better demand your share of the money for letting him use your scenes. XD Excellent writing as always, I am off to read the next one!
hungrytiger11
2009-09-20 . chapter 17
What a fun idea to have Tsubaki get a fan club ! Creative storyline.
REDskies
2009-09-19 . chapter 17
Ahahaha. Oh Black Star, always making such an impact on the lowly masses :D I loved it as usual, although I can sympathize with Tsubaki's liking of all the attention lavished onto her, I'd expect it doesn't come often. Heehee, and a jealous (kind of?) Black Star is awesome. I enjoyed it so much! :D
Pachi
2009-09-19 . chapter 17
This made me lol XD
Twas wincakes!
And requests? *puppy dog eyes*
Wel remember that picture that I have as my icon? That like, inspired you for a oneliner thing?
Yeah. I'm going there. XD

I totally understand if you can't find the muse to write that though, AU or whatev.

I'll read whatever the heck ya post though!

~Pachi
weixuan18
2009-09-19 . chapter 17
Poor Tsubaki, it was a very nicely written chap. I loved how Black Star kissed her to prove sth. Great idea. :D

Keep it up.
Milli Tora
2009-09-18 . chapter 12
By time I reached the end, I was going "AW~!" really loud and the nice people surrounding me gave me quite the glares at the disturbance. *sweatdrops* And your right, the idea that Black Star and Tsubaki ever becoming separated never once did cross my mind. It just doesn't seem possible (The assassin is just too godly to let that happen!). Gah! This one was so adorable! You captured the feeling of loneliness and longing to be with one another so perfectly, it almost had me feeling utter sad that Tsubaki wasn't returning home fast enough. XD Black Star going insane would be a not-so-nice image to imagine. Shinigam-sama, always the schemer, aren't you? X3 But, hey, if it helps, thank the Death God (don't hurt him too much, ok?). Favorite! Favorite! XD This one has become my next favorite. Unfortunately, this will be the last one I cover for today. But! Do not worry, I will be back soon with more reviews!! XD
Milli Tora
2009-09-18 . chapter 11
XD I was laughing the minute I dove in and found out exactly what this one was about. Believe it or not, in a similar situation, I was 'Black Star', so to speak, while my best friend was 'Tsubaki' as she explained to me the wonderful world of condoms. There was a whole lot of blushing on my part and a lot of laughter from my friend. Needless to say, this one was entertaining. I can see this happening and it makes me chuckle at how childish Black Star and the others (with maybe the exception of Kid) are compared to Tsubaki. I feel for her on this one, so don't fret Tsubaki!! X3 And that little hint of lemon at the end was rather anticipated but unexpected, still I should have known better what with the theme and all. Ah yes, be VERY happy, Tsubaki, that Black Star chose you and not some tasteless airhead. XD Great writing as always, I'm off to read one more!
Milli Tora
2009-09-18 . chapter 10
I had some time in the library today and decided to review your lovely chapter. Mind you, I may only be able to do a couple, but I will try my best to review as many as I can. =) Now, time to review! What I liked about this one was Black Star's indifference to the whole situation. I was a little annoyed at his lack of interest for his partner (What the hell?! You jerk, go find her!) until I realized that, yes, he has a right to act this way. To me, Black Star does not seem like the type of person who would go up to the person and outright ask for forgiveness or 'beg'. That is simply not his style. And Maka's annoyance to his indifference was rather funny as well. XD I feel for Tsubaki when they may have a difference of opinion, but it was rather sweet of the man to go out in the rain to look for her on the excuse of finding an already purchase magazine. X3 He really is cute when he is attempting to apologize. I was practically drowning at the fluff of it all. XD I like this one and am hereby naming it my favorite (there will be others along the way, I can assure you X3). Awesome, spectacular writing as always! I am off to review the next one!!
hi
2009-09-12 . chapter 16
update soon! the fanfic is fantastic!
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